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A Micro-girl's Rightful Place By Vesari -- Report

A futanari wakes up to find herself being held captive, with her best friend slowly sinking down into her cock...

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I had this idea for a story a LONG time ago, and it's been sitting in my "ideas" folder for literally like three years. It was based on an image where a futanari had to navigate a maze with her penis, and if she got zapped, she'd cum. I don't remember the artist or even still have picture, but it was really awesome.

This week on Patreon, the next part of VoreFans is out! Melissa enters Azrael's lair, while her plan goes into action... If you'd like to read it early, you can click here: https://www.patreon.com/posts/vorefans-part-15-69801274

Also this week on Patreon is the August alternate ending poll! If you'd like to help pick out an alternate ending, you can click here: https://www.patreon.com/posts/69801352

Thumbnail art made by "ayanakitori"; https://img3.gelbooru.com//images/75/ff/75ffec7322f5f798a41bb0347392ecdd.jpg

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Siorche

Posted by Siorche 2 years ago Report

I have to say, "SAW but cockvore" is a premise I never expected to see, but it wasn't unwelcome. Nicely done.

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Onewingedangel

Posted by Onewingedangel 2 years ago Report

A part 2 where it’s years later and Katie turns the tables on her captor after becoming fully “educated” and addicted to consuming micros would be absolutely perfect

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Matanuiv

Posted by Matanuiv 2 years ago Report

I don't think Katie should embrace it. I think she should TRICK the captor into thinking she has been "educated", and capture her. That way she cannot keep doing this, and also doesn't get eaten. She can neither continue enforcing her 'natural order', nor does she get to join it.

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Onewingedangel

Posted by Onewingedangel 2 years ago Report

That sounds incredibly boring and counter to the theme of the story, but to each their own.

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AnAccount

Posted by AnAccount 2 years ago Report

Last 4 words were the only objective, useful ones

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Onewingedangel

Posted by Onewingedangel 2 years ago Report

No need to be a jerk. He commented on my comment, so I responded with my opinion.

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AnAccount

Posted by AnAccount 2 years ago Report

I didn't call anyones opinion incredibly boring. Good day

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Onewingedangel

Posted by Onewingedangel 2 years ago Report

His comment was in response to mine. That’s fair play for criticism considering he presented it as a counter opinion, rather than just a comment on the story itself. You are being a troll for no reason at all on an opinion posted months ago. Jerk. Good day.

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Augustin

Posted by Augustin 2 years ago Report

Holy shit, that plot twist... Superb.

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Vesari

Posted by Vesari 2 years ago Report

Thank you!

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nekomimi1998

Posted by nekomimi1998 2 years ago Report

Great story but i have a question, what would happen if she successfuly got her friend out? The captor seemed hell bent on ensuring emma's digestion

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Vesari

Posted by Vesari 2 years ago Report

That’s a good question. Maybe we’ll find out someday.

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AngelicRune

Posted by AngelicRune 2 years ago Report

This was insanely hot.
Thankfully I can't deem myself a heathen.

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AngelicRune

Posted by AngelicRune 2 years ago Report

Android lag made me post 20 comments what the heck

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Vesari

Posted by Vesari 2 years ago Report

Lmao, I opened up Eka's, saw I had 12 comments and knew someone was having trouble.

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Belly97

Posted by Belly97 2 years ago Report

A sequel where she got to turn the tables on her captor would be great. It would also be cool to see an alternate ending where she succeeds, and they get to go home safely, but slowly discover that they have awakened a kink inside themselves for this.

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Nalzindar

Posted by Nalzindar 2 years ago Report

This was a great story, I loved the tension and the impending doom which slowly came closer to poor Emma. It was good to see that Katie worried for her friend to the very end and actually tried to stop her from being cock vored by herself, it gives her a moral character to contrast the story's antagonist :D
I would love to see a sequel for this one time and see if Katie ever manages to get revenge on the mysterious woman^^

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