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Where The Home Is C4 (HNTBL Spin-off 5x4) By Nomad3628 -- Report

Multiple character development. Some for the better, some not much for others.

Fifth Segment after Dark Path

How Not To Become Lunch is owned by TheDragonBoy and x9comega.

This Spinoff is not Canon.

If anyone has constructive criticism or just a thought to share, I would gladly hear it.

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Wolfsage

Posted by Wolfsage 2 years ago Report

Ooohhh I wonder what's gonna happen next.

Nomad3628

Posted by Nomad3628 2 years ago Report

Generals China Dozer - "We have big plans."

MingauNight

Posted by MingauNight 2 years ago Report

Oooohh poor Greg, two friends in less than 5 chapters. and poor David too.

Nomad3628

Posted by Nomad3628 2 years ago Report

Yes, poor, slime covered David. But at least Fels is at the peak of her life.

TheMysteriousSadSack

Posted by TheMysteriousSadSack 2 years ago Report

Fels better hope that Greg doesnt find out. Im pretty sure he wont take this well. Then again, I hope Fels snaps out of it and realises just how deep in it she is.

Nomad3628

Posted by Nomad3628 2 years ago Report

Teal’c - "Indeed."

Mechdragon1k

Posted by Mechdragon1k 2 years ago Report

I love the vivid image of the belly.

Nomad3628

Posted by Nomad3628 2 years ago Report

I’m glad that I could give it to you.

chibidiely777

Posted by chibidiely777 2 years ago Report

After all the hard work he finally got eaten and she finally fullfil her wish damn I wonder what will happen next and how will his friends react? It may bother about me knowing about this and make me feel upset but I really love it and wish to know more!

Nomad3628

Posted by Nomad3628 2 years ago Report

I'm really glad you love this series. And I'm currently halway done with the 6x2

chibidiely777

Posted by chibidiely777 2 years ago Report

Well you said this is a spin off yes? And I didn't read the real one yet nor the next page of it yet but I will read the next one and the next when I feel like kinda vory and I'm always feels horny and vory every few minutes or so and i booe to see more

Nomad3628

Posted by Nomad3628 2 years ago Report

I really recommend reading the original stuff. That series is why I started to write.

chibidiely777

Posted by chibidiely777 2 years ago Report

Alright I think I'll read that first and continue reading this