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A commissioned story, Nix's mother and stepmother have a lot in common. They're both permanently pregnant, they're both huge and curvaceous, and they both want him, one for his body, one for his money. But as they compete for his affections, Nix's mother Stella takes extreme steps to come out on top.
Commissioned by Jimbo-scion
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Posted by smog1 8 days ago Report
i apologize if this is going to sound negative.
I dont really like the ending to this story.
For starters, the evil woman will need her son to sign the papers and stuff. How is she goign to do that with him trapped inside?
Makes no sense really.
Again, I apologize and i am not trying to hate this story of yours that was commissioned.
Posted by Nevek 8 days ago Report
Forgery is easy.
Posted by smog1 8 days ago Report
i would understand if you prefer to delete my message. I apologoze for being salty XS
Posted by Forstand 5 days ago Report
This story was really great, bravo!
Posted by Apostolos 3 days ago Report
Honestly this is just a sad ending for Nix and Maggie, separated forever by a greedy mother who just couldn’t let money slip away