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The Kraan 16 By Riraito -- Report

A commission for Bigluster84

Crewmembers are hovered out into the Dyson Sphere's docking arm meatmarket.

Stalls featuring exotic alien meats line the promenade Most of them look like they might belong to sentient species...

...particularly the strung up bodies of three human women, their heads spiked on metal poles as some form of advertisement...

..who happen to be the Captain, the First Officer, and the Navigator of their ship.

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Xyd

Posted by Xyd 2 years ago Report

To answer your reply to my comment on another work in this series, yes I do like where it has gone! I also always enjoy an unexpected bilingual bonus from knowing my runelore ^_^;

"FRESH MEAT"
"QUALITY FOODS"
"SWEET TREATS"

Riraito

Posted by Riraito 2 years ago Report

yeah - I wanted to make sure that all the alien signs and computer screens were translatable...

I toyed with doing a version where all the alien dialogue was solely in runes/a custom set of letters... but I felt that the text was necessary for the viewer to understand... even if the characters didn't.

Xyd

Posted by Xyd 2 years ago Report

Oh yeah, you'd have had to write it completely differently for that, and you'd have missed out all the fun stuff with the reluctant but willing brainy cattle aliens <3

Riraito

Posted by Riraito 2 years ago Report

I figured, If you have sentient alien prey, best to utilise that communication ability somehow.

emikochan

Posted by emikochan 2 years ago Report

I love these aliens, great story ^^

Riraito

Posted by Riraito 2 years ago Report

well they love sexy kitty aliens too... primarily eating them.

Salisha

Posted by Salisha 2 years ago Report

Seems like a fun place to visit...so long as you aren't livestock at least!

Riraito

Posted by Riraito 2 years ago Report

So long as your species passes the brainscan you should be safe from being considered slaves/food.

Salisha

Posted by Salisha 2 years ago Report

Didn't help those two pig-like aliens much though!

Riraito

Posted by Riraito 2 years ago Report

I think they’re more victims of their god-queen’s theocratic political machinations. If it werent for their cultural blind devotion to their diety leader... they probably wouldn’t have been offered to the Kraan. Those carnivourous green insectoid aliens have standards with who theyre willing to cinsider equals... but theyre not going to say no to a free lunch.

FourzeRiderTea

Posted by FourzeRiderTea 2 years ago Report

Good thing I wasn't on that trip through space

Riraito

Posted by Riraito 2 years ago Report

I have a beer that I’m drinking... but when the remainder of this commission is payed up... I’m going to ask you to hold it for me.

FourzeRiderTea

Posted by FourzeRiderTea 2 years ago Report

Ok

DsxZg

Posted by DsxZg 2 years ago Report

Great picture and great market. I liked the plot.

Riraito

Posted by Riraito 2 years ago Report

More story to come, nce my commissioner comes through with the commission fee.

DsxZg

Posted by DsxZg 2 years ago Report

People look natural in this market. Almost indistinguishable from the rest of the cattle. The best thing people can eat here is that their meat is recognized as a particularly tasty delicacy.
The poor crew have nothing to look forward to without their senior officers. Looks like they're beginning to come to terms with their new role.

Riraito

Posted by Riraito 2 years ago Report

well - they won't have long to complete their adjustment

DsxZg

Posted by DsxZg 2 years ago Report

The chefs and butchers will make their adjustments and they don't have to worry about it.

PCGamer1009

Posted by PCGamer1009 2 years ago Report

This series of pictures was so incredibly hot! Absolutely love brain-related stuff, and seeing all the brain wiping was amazing!

Riraito

Posted by Riraito 2 years ago Report

Got to love a good brain wipe scenario.

PCGamer1009

Posted by PCGamer1009 2 years ago Report

Agreed!

dziobak112

Posted by dziobak112 2 years ago Report

I hope you will continue this story, this is great and have a good potential!

Riraito

Posted by Riraito 2 years ago Report

The entire second part of this story is already completed and ready to go... I'm just waiting on the commissioner to get back in contact with me so I can recieve the commission for it.