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Hello everyone !
Here's a short silly version of Goldilocks I wrote after getting the idea from a friend. It's not very long, but the tale itself isn't very complex, and I have a lot of things going on, so I decided to keep it short and simple.
Hope it can still be enjoyable!
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Posted by FurryTastyTreat 2 years ago Report
I love vore fairy tales, and this is a particularly good one.
It seems that Goldilocks makes a good dinner. The way you describe her makes me want to dine on her.
Posted by BunnyLily 2 years ago Report
Thanks, glad to hear you liked it ^^
Posted by TMVore 2 years ago Report
Couldn't they take a walk to let the meal/girl cool down a bit? I didn't want to settle for left overs xD loved it. <3
Posted by BunnyLily 2 years ago Report
That's still a lot of meat to eat :D happy to hear ^^
Posted by TMVore 2 years ago Report
Are we questioning my eating speed or stomach size? :p
Posted by BunnyLily 2 years ago Report
The size, probably :D
Posted by Taffy98 2 years ago Report
Hope there are more good tasty tales to come. Maybe the next one will be about little red riding hood and a wolf?
Posted by BunnyLily 2 years ago Report
One day probably, next I don't know :D
Posted by STMSystem 2 years ago Report
That was great, I enjoyed the description of the cooking and you resisting the urge to write the famous "just right" line.
Posted by BunnyLily 2 years ago Report
Thanks ^^ I actually didn't know about that line :D but I don't think I'd have used it anyway :p
Posted by STMSystem 2 years ago Report
Oh, interesting, every time I heard the story the chair, poridge and bed were described as just right each time she chose the 3rd option. perhaps it's different in other languages and stuff.
Posted by BunnyLily 2 years ago Report
Oh, that line, misunderstood that sorry ^^' yeah, I don't like the "always just right" trope, so I didn't use it :p
Posted by STMSystem 2 years ago Report
Yeah, I prefer it your way <3
Posted by Blonner 2 years ago Report
Eehhehehe, maybay sh instead a daugther be better if the "bear" had a son :D and maybay the son had some fun with the girl ;)
Posted by BunnyLily 2 years ago Report
That can be another version :p