im guessing she didn't actually want a baby? seems it didn't take her long to flush the husband too, if a part of his wife still remained in the toilet
Hmmm, what could possibly give you that impression? Zi is a meek and submissive woman who wanted nothing more than to become her new husband's broodmare. She certainly wasn't interested in inheriting his estate.
Goddamn it, I've got work to do but couldn't pass up a story that started like this. One of the most imaginative framing devices I've seen! I love the contrast between the well-written, slowly-revealed, monstrous betrayal and the absurdity of a shit doing the recollection. Well-written, hot, and hilarious.
I don’t think I’ve ever read a story told this way before! I love the way all the cruel details are slowly drip-fed to the reader. I was hooked from the first sentence, but it took my two reads for the story to fully *click*
I particularly love how regal Zi is. The framing of the story builds her up into a digestive goddess. The throne imagery and fart worship fits her so well. I see exactly how even a formidable hunk like William ended up helplessly enchanted by her.
Posted by Zelda 2 years ago Report
Well damn, this was great. Unexpected, but great.
Posted by Vorixx69 2 years ago Report
im guessing she didn't actually want a baby? seems it didn't take her long to flush the husband too, if a part of his wife still remained in the toilet
Posted by Augustin 2 years ago Report
Hmmm, what could possibly give you that impression? Zi is a meek and submissive woman who wanted nothing more than to become her new husband's broodmare. She certainly wasn't interested in inheriting his estate.
Posted by Sehnsucht 2 years ago Report
Goddamn it, I've got work to do but couldn't pass up a story that started like this. One of the most imaginative framing devices I've seen! I love the contrast between the well-written, slowly-revealed, monstrous betrayal and the absurdity of a shit doing the recollection. Well-written, hot, and hilarious.
Posted by siliconecyborg 3 months ago Report
I don’t think I’ve ever read a story told this way before! I love the way all the cruel details are slowly drip-fed to the reader. I was hooked from the first sentence, but it took my two reads for the story to fully *click*
I particularly love how regal Zi is. The framing of the story builds her up into a digestive goddess. The throne imagery and fart worship fits her so well. I see exactly how even a formidable hunk like William ended up helplessly enchanted by her.