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A Villager's Prize and the Hero's Demise By FutureBellyAche -- Report

The hero has single-handedly defeated the demonlord. The land has been saved! He wearily stumbles homeward, and takes an unfortunate tumble so close to his hometown.

And doubley unfortunately for him, one hungry widow happens upon his weakened body.
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A commission for the lovely  soyaEgg who was a pleasure to work with.

You can seek me out for a commission if you want to see me tackle your idea! Just reach out with a pm and check https://aryion.com/g4/userpage.commission.php?id=FutureBellyAche for the details.

Thumbnail source: https://mobile.twitter.com/Aestheticc_Meme/status/1503798390857023498

I also meant to section off disposal for three public release but didn't... all well. Today we all see the dirty.

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doomed

Posted by doomed 2 years ago Report

lmao whats with everyone hating the hero lmao

but milfs are awesome

FutureBellyAche

Posted by FutureBellyAche 2 years ago Report

Heros are just such fun to digest!

doveofwar1

Posted by doveofwar1 2 years ago Report

You could always do other characters in the village the tired hero runs into. Such as his mother, sister, or other villagers if you look into making a series.

bajillionandone

Posted by bajillionandone 2 years ago Report

This is wonderful, I love how cruel and gassy Milla is!

theonlymatt

Posted by theonlymatt 2 years ago Report

"I took it upon myself to take in some of the older orphaned boys."

I absolutely love writing like this. The pred means it one way but they prey takes it the conventional way. I try writing that way but I don't have your talents.

Fatedmeal

Posted by Fatedmeal 2 years ago Report

Fantastic story. Really enjoyed how fixated the predator was on one aspect of the vore process. As a prize for such a fun read here is an exact image source of the story’s thumbnail.

https://mobile.twitter.com/Aestheticc_Meme/status/1503798390857023498

FutureBellyAche

Posted by FutureBellyAche 2 years ago Report

Oh thanks! Pm both accounts. It was an enjoyable write.

Corvum

Posted by Corvum 2 years ago Report

Oh the tragecy. Such a delicious tragecy! Nobody will know that he was so close to returning home... well he did at least arrive back in his village, even if no one would say that his state was in prestine condition~
Gotta love it, when great heros just find their end as some nobody´s bowel movement~

TheSwayed

Posted by TheSwayed 1 year ago Report

Great! powerful man become weaker pred's tits is the most exciting part.
Can I trans this to other language and upload to pixiv?
I will mark the link to this article =v=

TheSwayed

Posted by TheSwayed 1 year ago Report

And...
Moist glrcks fill the otherwise silent bathroom as the hero is taken from this world.
What does the "glrcks" in this sentence mean?
I can't understand~

FutureBellyAche

Posted by FutureBellyAche 1 year ago Report

Glrrcck is a form of onomatopoeia. It's sound commonly associated with swallowing.

FutureBellyAche

Posted by FutureBellyAche 1 year ago Report

I'd prefer not. I've heard tales of people agreeing to this and then selling it elsewhere as paid content. Maybe it's paranoia but i'd rather not deal with it. Sorry.

TheSwayed

Posted by TheSwayed 1 year ago Report

Well, it does happen, there are greedy bad guys in any area, and while I feel sorry for this reply, I respect your decision. |ω・)