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Chapter 21.
Elyon is brought back to Ionait who hide her in a dark place where even darker things lurk. Will she be able to escape from the evil sorceress' monsters?
This chapter is heavily inspired by a recent movie which I assume many of you have seen, and this is my interpretation of a certain scene.
You can find a map over the world in my Xantos series here:https://aryion.com/g4/view/813080
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Please leave a review and tell me what you think^^
Posted by johaku99 2 years ago Report
Ok love the deep rising tentacle reference I hope xantos gets to Elyon quick
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Posted by Nalzindar 2 years ago Report
Thanks^^
Xantos will appear and play a far bigger role in the next chapter, I just had to amuse myself with tentacles first : )
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Posted by DrakentheBlack 2 years ago Report
Elyon is a good girl going out of her way to help all the prisoners escape in spite of the immediate danger!
But tentacles are always welcome and appreciated!
This scenario reminds me a bit of the giant scorpion creature from the most recent Fantastic Beasts movie, and I love the sadistic game of hot potato with the lantern determining who would be eaten next!
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Posted by Nalzindar 2 years ago Report
I hadn’t used tentacles yet and felt a need to diversify the way people are getting eaten, and the reference to Fantastic Beasts or Deep Sea Rising (whatever you think resemble most) was something I suddenly came up with and wanted to write about.
Elyon does of course wish to be a nice girl, despite Xantos’ dubious influence. But her own survival instinct comes first so kicking the light to somebody else is a necessary evil she can live with. I’m also quite proud of coming up with the «hot potato» idea for this scenario:3
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Posted by Adas 2 years ago Report
One of the best series on this site ^^
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Posted by Nalzindar 2 years ago Report
I have often wondered whether my stories are read or if people just click on it and leave, so thank you so very much for telling me this. It is uttermost kind of you and I hope I can keep up with the stuff you think makes the story worth reading^^
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Posted by PrinnyDood 2 years ago Report
Ohhh, this was a really good chapter! One of my favorites easily. I love some naughty tentacle vore, and the whole scenario with the lantern in the darkness with the tentacle-pit was really tense and and vivid. Elyon is definitely proving her ability at getting out of a tight situation with or without that ring!
Based on the type of 'prison' she used, I get the impression Ionait isn't THAT committed to the idea of using Elyon as a means to manipulate Xantos. xD Seems like there was a decent chance of Elyon not surviving long enough for that.
Great stuff, and I'm very curious for how it will play out from here!
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Posted by Nalzindar 2 years ago Report
Thanks, I know how well you enjoy tentacles so I purposely added this scene to the chapter, which also gave me the opportunity to put some variation in the way people are getting eaten (and abused?) here^^
Being cooky/narcissistic and underestimating others are an important part of a villains personality, and Ionait has a few standard issues. Elyon's well-being is of little importance for Ionait at this point, and if she should happen to survive the imprisonment it would only be by chance.
Thank you for reading and I hope my next chapter will be equally entertaining : )
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