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So this short story is a little longer, but I think those navel vore fans out there will really love it. I've been trying to do more straight up writing lately and these short stories are a part of that effort. So, please enjoy!
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Posted by ALAMOS123 2 years ago Report
great story! love the implications of the epilogue and the tattooification is a pretty interesting thing from you! would love to see some art of tara at some point
Posted by Apathy 2 years ago Report
I might if there's enough interest. I spend a lot of time on my art.
Posted by doomed 2 years ago Report
wow, she may be the most evil person you wrote about lmao like even chelsey isnt this bad... i think XD
first theres the fact she ate her sons friends. felix definitely didnt deserve to die lol
then theres her intentionally tormenting her son and the implication that she introduced him to someone like her . i get the sense shes setting him up to be eaten lol
and then theres the clear implication that she has been eating and killing his friends for a while lol . even eating his dad lmao.
she's pure evil and likable which is a hard combo to pull off lmao. and he totally needs therapy XD
this was so seductively done. and it makes it clear that she is hunting them all. or rather that shes a spider and they are all flies in her web. i love how it came out. like even the pacing is amazing its honestly got the best pacing out of all your stories .
good job . also she totally deserves a picture
Posted by Apathy 2 years ago Report
Oh! I'm happy you enjoyed it! I think it might be some of the best vore I've written. Yea, she's basically a sociopath. I'll probably work on a character pic next weekend if I can find it he time.
Posted by usersp 2 years ago Report
these stories are just so smooth to read holy crap, i legit loooooved how casual tara is about eating people, it feels like the whole world is about hungry girls after cute boys to eat
Posted by Draegonx 1 year ago Report
Have read this multiple times, it's so good