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A Regency damsel is shown the inner workings of high society by her fashionable aunt.
Everything in this story is 100% historically accurate, except the part about Jane Austen being a serial devourer of young women. I made that bit up.
Next, I'll be returning to the world of Skyrim for a continuation of Sophia's adventures with the Dark Brotherhood. Till then!
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Posted by Indighost 2 years ago Report
Great story! Love the way you write.
Posted by Apostolos 2 years ago Report
Certainly dark but very well written
Posted by Whereaminow27 2 years ago Report
I would have loved for a reverse situation, where when her aunt tried to eater her, she slipped or accident, and molly ended up gulping her down. -_-
Posted by Whereaminow27 2 years ago Report
Of course, probably deciding to take over, and slipping away to get her mother, and then having the maid join her later. With her pretty much taking her aunt's place.
Posted by FernGilly 2 years ago Report
Marvelous use of euphemisms, absolutely delightful reading. These passages tickled my sense of humor in a manner few writings do these days, and the original nature of the premise was a breath of fresh (or noxious, depending on your end of the bargain) air.
Posted by Augustin 2 years ago Report
Thank you! I had plenty of fun sprinkling this story with puns and references, and I'm glad you enjoyed it.
Posted by Gorgrath177 2 years ago Report
Very well written, great setting
Posted by KimMadcox 2 years ago Report
Very lovely story <3
Posted by shlurpay64 2 years ago Report
Wow, I tend not to go for such long stories but this one was worth it. Normally I just don't even bother with stories that have such a long build up but your use of dark humor, euphamisms, and foreshadowing made it incredibly hot to read the whole way through and you deserve serious credit for bringing the aesthetic of English nobility of bygone years and contemporary literature to life. I feel almost guilty for not being familiar with all the references you worked in (I looked up a few). I only read so many stories on Eka's and I'm so lucky I picked this one and felt obligated to comment on it.
I would have preferred to have even more talk about fatness, burps, pooping, digestion, etc and a couple of farts would have been amazingly dirty but that's just me being gross.
This is so easily one of the best stories I've read on this site and I really hope more and more people read it and stick with it even if parts of it seem off to them at first, it's really worth it!
Posted by shlurpay64 2 years ago Report
Oh and I laughed aloud about Mr. Paine being a "beastly revolutionist and the Yanks can keep him" and the Rights of Prey. I at least got that reference
Posted by Augustin 2 years ago Report
This is such a generous comment. I almost want to frame it.
I was worried about the length of this one, so I'm pleased to hear you didn't find the build-up too much of a slog. I mostly skim-read the dry parts of Ekas stories myself, ironically enough; but I can never seem to write a vore scene without thousands of words of preparation. In this case, I tried to lather on the euphemism to keep the reader going, and I'm glad it worked.
I'm rather vanilla for this site, which is why there isn't much "grossness". I've built up a strong tolerance for scat, farting, belching, &c., (to the point that I can no longer write vore without at least implied disposal; it just doesn't feel complete otherwise) although it's not something I'm instinctively drawn to. That said, I do occasionally dabble, and you might be interested in "Memento", the dirtiest story I've written. It starts abstract, I admit, but it turns properly foul.
Again, thank you for the kindness. It's dark outside now, but you've brightened my evening.
Posted by shlurpay64 2 years ago Report
Aww,I'm glad you appreciate the feedback, I felt like this story needs more accolades for what a good job you did with it.
The length of the story in this case didn't feel like a negative element for me because there was a lot of erotic stuff liberally sprinkled in.
I did notice a few stories of yours under the wonderful "farting" tag including "Memento" so I might check that one out soon.
Posted by Deegdumdoodilly 1 year ago Report
I'm just blown away. This is one of the best executed vore stories I've ever read. The buildup of suspense, keeping the subject oblivious but granting these explicit glimpses to the reader, it's all wonderful. You had me devastated at the conclusion despite having signaled it so clearly from the title itself. The writing style perfectly captured the source material. Really just excellent in all regards. Poor Molly.