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Chapter 23 of my Xantos series.
Xantos has escaped with Elyon and their relationship continues to grow as he opens up and tell Elyon more about himself and why he see more in human (women) than just food. But what will Elyon herself think of this?
This chapter came out longer than my usual ones, but I had it planned for a long time so I knew what I wanted to write, and as you can see from the headline, I will write another part.
A map over Xantos' world is here:https://aryion.com/g4/view/813080
The link to my thumbnail picture is here:https://aryion.com/g4/view/843891
As always, please leave a review and tell me what you think so I know what to write more of^^
Posted by johaku99 1 year ago Report
Part one was great cant wait for pRt 2
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Posted by Nalzindar 1 year ago Report
Thanks, I already got the plans for it^^
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Posted by johaku99 1 year ago Report
I so want xantos and Elyon to fuck
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Posted by Nalzindar 1 year ago Report
It will most likely happen at some (several) occasions, but I want to have a build up before such happens :3
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Posted by DrakentheBlack 1 year ago Report
Xantos is such a nice guy! Helping people out with their marriage problems, making sure women get a few good orgasms while they're being devoured, and only mounting once given permission.
I loved what he said to Elyon in dragon speech. Undoubtably, he wishes she would respond positively to such a statement!
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Posted by Nalzindar 1 year ago Report
I will in these chapters reveal more about Xantos and his relationship with people. Some of the background stuff has heavily influenced his character, putting him a part from the rest off the dragons, the following chapters will hopefully explain even more regarding the present-day drama between him and Ionait.
Yes, Xantos do have whats' needed to be a nice guy, even though a lot of people probably would think he should display these traits more often.
Xantos' dragon speech was very fun and I came up with it there and then while writing the main part of his story. I think I will reuse it on other occasions :P
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Posted by PrinnyDood 1 year ago Report
This was great once again! I was happy to see some development for Xantos & Elyon's relationship, those two have a really fun rapport with each other at this point. As well as a peek into Xantos' past!
The flashback where he meets Oxon was very fun, and far more voracious than I was expecting, much to my happiness. I feel like Xantos could make a decent living helping out unfortunate men trapped in unhappy marriages. xD
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Posted by Nalzindar 1 year ago Report
Thanks, I'll try to make progress in their relationship, too much has happened for them so far to leting them get to know each other in a natural way, but this time they can spend some time together.
I was wondering how I should pull off this one with Oxon and I was fortunate enough that it turned out far better than what I feared. True Xantos could make a fine living out of taking care of these kind of problems ; )
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