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Sayori made the mistake of trusting Natsuki. A small bet turns into a fatal evening. Not that Natsuki really cares. Sayori was delicious.

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I suddenly remembered "Wow... I like Natsuki! And I haven't made content for her in some time? That's silly!"

This was pretty directly inspired some art pieces done recently. I really liked them honestly >.> I have a piece that's kind of inspired by it also unedited.
https://twitter.com/GunchMain/status/1594840796527722496
https://twitter.com/GunchMain/status/1595203221840023552

If you like fat Natsuki, look forward to it~

And for those curious about the doki game. It's still on my radar but there's been a complication. I new version will hopefully be out before the years end, but we will have to see.

Feel free to ask me about commissions. I'm working through my current list~

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TrainerKatrine

Posted by TrainerKatrine 2 years ago Report

Aawhhh, this was really cute and fun! I like the thought of Satori just being called a treat, heh.. :p
Lovely story, and you seem to be foreshadowing something in the future, so I'll look forward to that!
Oh, and lovely use of Monica, although I'm a little unsure on what she was doing? She'd eaten someone, but it can't have been Yuri or the MC, so.. I'm curious!
I think you nailed the description of what I call the "ideal cute-shape" as well! Slight bits of tummy tub, a cute chest, a puffy butt, and thigh-high stretching thighs!
It was also enjoyable to see her personality blend in with the cuteness.. like, she's not all "uwu kawaii desu..", but she's still cute enough in personality, and it mirrored her personality from in game very well! ^~^
Lovely story as always :3

FutureBellyAche

Posted by FutureBellyAche 2 years ago Report

Thank you :3
It was a little vague but Yuri was actually the one who ate "The boy in the club" who is the MC. Theres only one boy in the story. But i can see how it would be confusing. MC is canonically male, but i tend to write it so its ambigious. I didnt have a followup planned, maybe ill do it if i find a cute angle but this was mostly juat me wanting to see Natsuki tease somebody in their belly~

I really like writing for her. Shes fun. And prime for growing after melting her prey~

TrainerKatrine

Posted by TrainerKatrine 2 years ago Report

I did catch that Yuri ate them, I was just confused on who Monika ate in that case x3

doomed

Posted by doomed 2 years ago Report

I really love when you write natsuki as a pred

FutureBellyAche

Posted by FutureBellyAche 2 years ago Report

Shes a cute and hungry lil thang~

Avpete

Posted by Avpete 2 years ago Report

Heh, always good to see some pred Natsuki~

theonlymatt

Posted by theonlymatt 2 years ago Report

Niiiiiice. Also DDVC 3 hype!

FutureBellyAche

Posted by FutureBellyAche 2 years ago Report

Its coming! I may be slow but it'll come out!

Whymanamajeff

Posted by Whymanamajeff 2 years ago Report

So good, missed your Doki Doki stories, they’re really a cut above the rest!

Corvum

Posted by Corvum 2 years ago Report

Damn, that was a fun read as always!
I admire how you´re able to just write these pre-existing characters without making it feel wrong, for thats something I myself struggle with very much.
Nice to see another Doki-Story from you!
Love how Natsuki just tells Sayori, how she´s planning to just use her money to buy herself new clothes.
Keep at it and have a nice day!

FutureBellyAche

Posted by FutureBellyAche 2 years ago Report

Natsuki is pretty fun and easy for me to write. She just presses a lot of my buttons. Im not as good with others honestly :>

Casual cruelty very hot though~

Fatedmeal

Posted by Fatedmeal 2 years ago Report

Quite a fan of how you had Natsuki connect the dots between her malodorous belches being due to a horribly nauseous gastric environment that Sayori had to endure. It’s little details like that, that make each of your stories unique.

FutureBellyAche

Posted by FutureBellyAche 2 years ago Report

<3

mealerlord

Posted by mealerlord 2 years ago Report

Now I want a "spinoff" of how Yuri ate MC