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The outer digestive track By ryanshowseason3 -- Report

It's guys night out and girls night in on the unreliable. Parvati is hoping to bring the women together for some serials and snacks but Nyoka's drunken shenanigans might make them all closer to each other than Parvati intended!

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Did this one a little while ago. Just now posting it. A little proud of it and I liked where it went with Parvati discovering her sexuality in an unexpected place. Though don't get me wrong asexuals exist, this is just fanfiction.

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Welcometocave

Posted by Welcometocave 2 years ago Report

very nice story, loved the detail in the disposal

Dooot

Posted by Dooot 2 years ago Report

Good story but I wish you were more descriptive on their appearances and stuff cuz this is the first time I learn of these characters.

ryanshowseason3

Posted by ryanshowseason3 2 years ago Report

Good point. Since these were game characters I guess I assumed people knew what they looked like. Bad assumption.

Metalization

Posted by Metalization 2 years ago Report

Parvati is just the best, gosh now I wanna save up for her binging on peeps while Junlei encourages as a feeder...

lorenzo64

Posted by lorenzo64 2 years ago Report

While many of your stories are favorites of mine, this new one tops the list. Not sure where to begin though. Its so detailed about the effects of digestion and how the two deal with inevitability of their own destruction as it occurs is just amazing. Well done.

Will there be a part 2 so we can see what happens to Junlei? Or is that left to our imagination <grin>?

ryanshowseason3

Posted by ryanshowseason3 2 years ago Report

Pretty much left to imagination. But thanks! I wanted to make this one somewhat graphic in the digestion and reveal what was going on in their heads as they take the final plunge.

lorenzo64

Posted by lorenzo64 2 years ago Report

Excellent! I'm always interested in their thoughts, especially the willing and if reforming is NOT involved. Reforming somehow lessens or reduces the exciting aspects of this digestive act.

Just my opinion...