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Eating its first prey is the first step that all young preds go through. But sometimes it doesn't happen as planned, especially when the prey is someone close and the pred is too sensitive. The pred must then live in a perpetual battle between remorse, guilt and her predatory instincts until she finally accepts herself.
This is the story around Lily who won the strawpoll. I decided to make a short story about what happened after the day Lily discovered she was a pred!
I hope you will like this story and don't hesitate to give your opinion in comments or in PM to tell me what you liked or hated !
Warning: English is not my first language (although I'm getting by) so I wrote my story in my native language before I had it translated by Deepl, corrected with my knowledge and and having it proofread by the friendly https://aryion.com/g4/user/EloquentOrc
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Posted by doomed 2 years ago Report
I love this story so much. As per usual you acknowledged the emotions of preds. Here you had lily show that not all preds are ok with killing people to survive . This realism is brilliant.
I had expected this from a prey perspective where prey would get depressed after a friend died . However I never thought someone would go at it from a preds persepctive .
Also I love how you’ve leaned into jade’s hatred for preds like miss rain or miss daniels . It makes sense too , they abused their positions to get meals . They did it for power and cruelty . Especially miss rain as she manipulated and took advantage of the minds of students who came to her in a crisis .
This is brilliant
Posted by BelovedSkull 1 year ago Report
I like lily i hope we get to see more of her
Posted by Hetzering 1 year ago Report
Don't worry, it's planned! I want to rewrite a story about Lily but I'm waiting to find a context that would suit her!
Posted by BelovedSkull 1 year ago Report
That is good news indeed