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I'm back.
In the aftermath of the Druchii ambush on the Sunderskull encampment, the embattled Kallo stands alone and surrounded by the enemy. Moments away from execution, his only hope stands with the intervention of an unlikely savior. Will it be enough, though, to defeat a blooded troupe of Khananite assassins and their dark sorceress leader?
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Posted by EnglishGamer 2 years ago Report
Well, I can definitely say I did not expect this. Really enjoyed this chapter, especially the long drawn out defeat of Lysindri, good old Foe-Eatah.
Glad to see you back. Hope you had a lovely xmas and cannot wait for the next chapter, see if Ranma can save the elven maidens from the River trolls.
Posted by Narrows 2 years ago Report
Glad you enjoyed it, thanks for the support! Now that I'm back I'm hoping to have a much more regular posting schedule, so you won't have to wait long to see how good Ramma is at the heimlich maneuver!
Posted by EnglishGamer 2 years ago Report
Can't wait. NGL I though Lysindri would have lasted till the end, pulled some Dark Elf shenanigans and feed Alarielle to a Squig or something. Looking forward to the final confrontation.
Posted by frostiey 2 years ago Report
So that was what was going on. And if she is successful is saving him foe-eatah might not see her as a foe, maybe. Who knows, now on to trolls vs orcs.
Posted by PrinnyDood 2 years ago Report
Ohhh nice, I'm glad you're back, and with another chapter of this epic tale!
Great pacing and descriptions as usual, especially with regard to the and delightfully vivid details as Lysindri is swallowed.
And it appears my theory from the last chapter was correct, and Taldeer has indeed managed to get herself into a position of considerable leverage over Kallo, at least for the moment.
I remain very eager to see how things play out from here! Both in the pending conflict between Ramma's side and the trolls, and the especially how Kallo & Taldeer's 'alliance' works out as everything comes to a head. Can't begin to guess how that will go down, but I have no doubt it'll be a great read.
Posted by Narrows 2 years ago Report
Thanks for your kind words and encouragement, it's a huge boost every time! Your theory was indeed correct, a moment of leverage that may or may not lead to deeper commitments. Only a few chapters left on this bad boy, I'll try to be quicker on the uploads this time around!
Posted by PrinnyDood 2 years ago Report
Well, I'm very happy if I can be a motivational boost when the story is this good!
Ohhh, you're coming up on the conclusion? Well, I can't wait to see how it ends, I'm sure it'll be a hell of a ride (hopefully with a healthy dose of voreness) however it concludes! I'm definitely looking forward to seeing it! :D
Posted by EnglishGamer 1 year ago Report
Always a good read through this series. Any ETA on the next chapter? Ramma may be too late to save the elf maidens.
Posted by EnglishGamer 8 months ago Report
Hi, are you going to continue this series or has the commissioner decided not to keep paying for this?
Posted by EnglishGamer 7 days ago Report
Hi,
Since it looks like this is going to be on the backburner could you possibly post the outline for the rest of this story? give us an idea on what was going to happen?