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Hey! Yeah been a long time since i posted a RWBY vore story. i think? well...
This is one of 4 i wanted to write. really only got the Weiss one done to want to post. Now i planed to have 4 different RWBY unbirthing stories. Each with their own setting and such.
This is the Weiss one. I have the Ruby one started but I need to go and try to write the Blake and Yang ones. Now all 4 are unbirth stories.
Just hope you all enjoy this is the only one of the four i think it would be fun to do more afterwards so its technically part 1 as i left the ending as open as i can.
Granted i admit the ending feels rushed, Cliche, or not that well written but i suppose i went with humor at the end. Hope you all enjoy it and please drop a comment
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Posted by Apostolos 2 years ago Report
Well that’s interesting, although the wording was a bit confusing at points. If I’m understanding properly, the shots were meant to seal the person’s womb shut, forming an artificial plug similar to actual pregnancy but made from flesh and nanites, correct?
Posted by Nightmare49 2 years ago Report
yeah. exactly
Posted by Apostolos 2 years ago Report
Alrighty, read most of your other rwby unbirth stuff while i was here too, the reaction series was great although I don’t really understand the point of “butt boobs”
Posted by Nightmare49 2 years ago Report
thanks for reading them. yeah. not everyone does but i tend to enjoy them.
Posted by Goldendevil21 2 years ago Report
Overall, liked the chapter.
What I liked. First, just the sexy events. Just loved reading how Neo would stuff up each girl into the other person's womb and seal them in. Their bellies getting massive as finally reaching Weiss who had to fit her whole team into her.
And just love the reactions to each of the characters to there new situation. Just loved reading how Weiss was 'wet' as she just woke up feeling incredibly heavy.
The plot was okay. Did really enjoy how Neo got revenge on the girls for killing her beloved. And in such a sexy way too.
Though not sure on the pool of immortality as that does make the story lose some of the tension when we know Weiss is invincible. No cuts, no bruises, no death. She is immortal. Not sure how to solve this. Recommend you just distract me with more sexy events.
Posted by Nightmare49 2 years ago Report
yeah i agree its not my best story. but yeah it would be more sexy and this is just mostly a oneshot story. there are going to be 3 other versions of RWBY unbirthing.
So while i would make her invivisble its more in the sense she cannot age. still able to get hurt. Forced to carry her entire team in her womb while she is just walking around whatever world she ends up in