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Let me introduce you to my latest obsession: Epithet Erased. If you haven't heard of it, look it up. It's an indie cartoon/novel series that's creative, funny, somewhat satirical, totally heartfelt and utterly adorable. It started out (if my knowledge is correct), as a crowd-funded animated series, with season 1 available to watch entirely for free on YouTube. For season 2, instead of going with expensive animation, they opted for a novel, "Epithet Erased: Prison of Plastic", along with an accompanying audiobook featuring all the voice actors from the animated season. It's great, you should check it out, I'll leave links.
But more to the point here, you probably wont understand any of this story if you haven't watched/read/heard both of those. So, yeah, going pretty niche here.
For the tiny fraction of humanity that enjoys both vore and Epithet Erased, rejoice! If you haven't guessed by the title, this is sort of a parody of Prison of Plastic; it takes place sometime before those events, but uses a few of the new characters and worldbuilding elements. The first few thousand words are literally just me having fun writing with the characters because I've grown to like them so much. But, of course, my story ends with a vorey twist. I know I'm not the first person to make Epithet Erased vore, but I think I might actually be the first to make PoP vore, I haven't found anything with this pred in particular. Not sure if this will find anyone in this overlap of demographics, but if it does, hey, leave a comment.
Lastly, I have to mention that this entire series was actually brought to my attention by x9comega, whom you might recognize as the co-creator of our original series "How Not To Become Lunch". They liked Epithet Erased so much that they got me to watch the first season, got me to buy the second, and then even "encouraged" me into writing this story. So if you're wondering what the latest delay on HNTBL is for, now you know. But, hey, that's a price I'm willing to pay if it means I get to meet characters as great as these.
Epithet Erased (season 1; animated; free):
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=yio2JNgQKBM&list=PLHACfIDFF66rxMt46cSoVxUulvL3bKluM
Epithet Erased: Prison of Plastic (effectively season 2; book/audiobook ; costs money):
https://soundbooththeater.com/shop/audiobooks/epithet-erased-prison-of-plastic/
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Posted by doomed 2 years ago Report
Sheesh so she killed her best friends older sister . Does Lorelei’s powers still work as a ghost ? Or is she really dead.
Cause that kinda sucks for her since she didn’t do anything wrong
Posted by x9comega 2 years ago Report
She’s awful and emotionally abusive. The way Loralai treats her sister makes me viscerally angry, you should get Prison of Plastic
Posted by doomed 2 years ago Report
Not really, it reads more so that she’s a child in need of help and her sister is caught in the crossfire . Especially since Molly is the only person who can essentially deactivate her bubbles. And Molly’s personality is kinda lorelai’s opposite. The entire story reads like a sister longing for a connection and it just doesn’t work because they both suck at it .
Posted by TheDragonBoy 2 years ago Report
I can see where you're coming from with that read. Lori is definitely a child (teen) in need of help, and she's very much longing for connection. But "didn’t do anything wrong"? She spends nearly the entire book, and the years leading up to it, doing wrong (and this story requires the context of PoP to make sense). Lori's trauma gives an explanation as to why she feels the way she feels, but I can't say it gives her an excuse to act the way she acts.
Posted by doomed 2 years ago Report
Sorry I should’ve clarified . When I said she did nothing wrong i was referring to your story not the book.
That said , even then everything that was built up by lori while bad , is definitely not enough to warrant her death.
Posted by TheDragonBoy 2 years ago Report
Yeah, I'm with you there. If I'd been writing a normal story I don't think I would have killed her (or anyone) off. But in a vore story... >:)
Posted by doomed 2 years ago Report
Bruh I just realized Molly likely could’ve deactivated this bubble so she let her sister die , how cruel XD
Also did Lorelei’s powers just stop working entirely because she was eaten . I mean when they left the bubble there should’ve been nothing ti stop her powers . Couldn’t she have just gone into another bubble ? Unless somehow trixi could digest the realities themselves
Posted by x9comega 2 years ago Report
The idea is that Lori is the catalyst of her own demise, she can’t focus so her powers are only working on the things she’s thinking about. Like digestion. Her powers are why she gurgles so fast
Posted by doomed 2 years ago Report
Hmm. , while that’s a good idea , that isn’t how it came across . It came across as Lorelei being victims of the whims of bunch of kids. The entire situation felt as if they instigated it. Yes her bubbles were in their way , and so they went in to ask her to move them. But they accidentally caused her to be shrunk , then when she got reasonably upset trixi shoved her in to her mouth. Then when Lori got even more upset trixi swallowed her . Heck even the animal instincts fall into that category too because she could’ve ignored it.
Heck even Lori wanting revenge is reasonable.
While the story paints it clearly that Lori doesn’t like her sister and her friends . It’s more so just simple older sibling dislike . Granted if you read the story this was based on that would have more context. But most people haven’t
I was half expecting it to be revealed that trixie’s stomach somehow negated epithets . Or that Lori was enjoying being in there and let herself die. Although that would’ve been weird .
Now I’m not saying it’s a bad story , just doesn’t read like that.
Posted by TheDragonBoy 2 years ago Report
I will say that how Omega described it is what was intended to come across. And I made it pretty clear in the description (that I know plenty of people don’t read) that PoP was required reading for any of this to really make sense.
Posted by x9comega 2 years ago Report
Also a side note: Molly absolutely cannot just Deactivate her sisters bubbles. Otherwise PoP wouldn’t have happenned XD
Posted by narutowolfie12 2 years ago Report
Ngl, was sorta hoping Lorelei was going to be the pred in this, but nonetheless it was a fun read. Certainly can see love for the characters here
Posted by TheDragonBoy 2 years ago Report
I think that was part of the original idea we had for this, but with a big part of Lori’s internal motivation being that she doesn’t want to hurt anyone with her epithet, it felt too OOC for me to make her the pred.
Posted by EternalFire99 2 years ago Report
Non-fatal vore is a thing but I get where you're coming from.
I too wanted a Lorelai pred whatever the outcome.