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After receiving a message from her instructor about nearly failing the class, Missy decides to participate in an extracurricular activity in order to bring up her grade.
The Thumbnail was made with NovelAI (I am not an artist nor pretend to be)
This story features Missy, and is a direct sequel from The Trickster story! You can read about this story here:https://aryion.com/g4/view/859282
If you want to read more about Missy and her lovable band of delinquents, check out where it all started with the Trouble makers story here:https://aryion.com/g4/view/857005
Forgive me for experimenting with third person again! I hope you guys like it!
Let me know how you feel in the comments!
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Posted by doomed 2 years ago Report
Honestly I was kinda hoping missy would die
In the setting you created while each character is great . There’s also no real attachment to a character. Because here it feels like no one is truly ever safe . so it feels like plot armor that missy survived let alone was some how still strong enough to fight back .while Harper despite being a smart pred herself , didn’t have a plan in case she got caught .
The upside here though is that while this story feels out of place . It makes for great character development for missy if she actually took the fact she almost died to heart and became a better person. Yeah she’s a remorseless pred , that’s normal in your setting. However her insecurities are part of what makes her just as bad as the two people she’s killed in vorish self defense but is a massive brat and totally a bully in comparison to other preds you’ve written about . Meaning if she actually started to learn and grow from this she’d become a better person. Still a remorseless pred , but unlike Imani and Lizzie, she could be a decent human being .
Kinda like Harley Quinn in the Harley Quinn show. Once Harley addressed her life and such , she went from being a heartless mass murderer , to being still a murderer but unless she has to or you piss her off , she won’t kill you.
Although if missy does this she probably lose her two friends and gain others .
Hehe , I’m torn because the obvious progression of a character like missy is to become more mature and work through her issues . The same could be said for Imani but with Imani her issues turned her essentially into an incel. And that’s a lot to work through. Either way this group would fall apart if even one of them started working to better themselves . I look forward to seeing how this goes though.
Posted by DreamEater 2 years ago Report
Harper is definitely a victim of “getting away with something for so long you relax your guard a bit.” I’m definitely getting more into developing the characters in the future. I’ve laid the ground work, but I’m going to flesh them out more and put them through…things.
Posted by doomed 2 years ago Report
I can definitely see the ground work laid out . I can’t wait to see where it goes , whether it be the implosion of the troublemakers or the destruction of the school as a whole XD although I suspect the teachers would put the girls in their place
Posted by DreamEater 2 years ago Report
It’s funny because all of those possibilities are equally likely. xD
Posted by goodguy 2 years ago Report
where could we find the thumbnail picture? is it on a website for novel ai repositories?
Posted by DreamEater 2 years ago Report
It’s, a generation website. Try it out and play around with it. It’s pretty fun.
Posted by Summerleaves 2 years ago Report
This reads like it could be the other perspective of a scene in the SMVA game.
Posted by DreamEater 2 years ago Report
I’ve played a lot of that game and have enjoyed it. The only difference is that Dream State University only has vore studies as one of it’s majors.
Posted by TMVore 2 years ago Report
I had a good chuckle at the end xD
Posted by DreamEater 2 years ago Report
Thanks buddy!!
Posted by RasenGun37 2 years ago Report
This one's pretty unique!
Posted by DreamEater 2 years ago Report
Thanks! I appreciate it!
Posted by RasenGun37 2 years ago Report
Yeah, you're welcome
Posted by AntimatterX 2 years ago Report
do you have the link for the thumbnail
Posted by DreamEater 2 years ago Report
Nah, this is before I start saving pictures with the stories.
Posted by AntimatterX 2 years ago Report
oh ok
Posted by Bod67 2 years ago Report
I hope Missy dosen't make it soon. Was so hoping she would get digested
Posted by DreamEater 2 years ago Report
Awww, what’s with the Missy hate? Haha
Posted by VoraciousSincerity 2 years ago Report
Having just read the story myself, I was OVERJOYED that Missy won this, I don't get the hate in these other comments at all, since her teacher was being petty to try what she was, and Missy's own perspective doesn't seem as arrogant as Ms. Oliver seemed to think.
Also, I don't agree with doomed at all, it isn't plot armor for Missy to be prepared, since she was taught to be in her classes. Not fond of when people misuse terms, I see it too often.
Full support from me DreamEater this story ended exactly as it should have, and that's a fact as far as I can see.
Posted by DreamEater 2 years ago Report
Thanks! I appreciate it when someone likes my stories. You’re awesome!
Posted by VoraciousSincerity 2 years ago Report
Honestly, I JUST found your stuff this morning from just general searching, and I LOVE a LOT of your work (You'll probably be seeing a series of favorites from me some time today or tomorrow, once I finish the couple of stories I have left to read).
You are definitely a worthy addition to the myriad of great creators I have found on here, and online in general. You write in a way that captures me, and I respect that a lot.
Also, you may have inspired a couple ideas for my own writing as well...
Posted by DreamEater 2 years ago Report
Awesome! I look forward to reading your stuff as well~
Posted by VoraciousSincerity 2 years ago Report
I write VASTLY differently, and do much dirtier stuff (you can look up what I've already written to get an idea or two), but hopefully I do well with it, whenever I get to those ideas.
Posted by DreamEater 2 years ago Report
I’m sure you will