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Gym Crunch (1/2) By BrightSideDown -- Report

Commission for Anonymous!

Pre-work out y'know

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JeebyHeebies

Posted by JeebyHeebies 2 years ago Report

Noooo don't eat a person in a wheelchair!!!

BrightSideDown

Posted by BrightSideDown 2 years ago Report

survival of the fittest y'know

uhohfellas

Posted by uhohfellas 2 years ago Report

oh thats a little... uh.

uhohfellas

Posted by uhohfellas 2 years ago Report

ignore me actually, i realize you meant "survival of the "fittest" in relation to her being human, not in a wheelchair. It was a gut reaction and I apologize

BrightSideDown

Posted by BrightSideDown 2 years ago Report

Yeah, I was referring to being human lol. That'd be pretty fucked up if I didnt haha

qawsedkre

Posted by qawsedkre 2 years ago Report

She clearly took her out of the wheelchair, so it's all good.

Sinny777

Posted by Sinny777 2 years ago Report

Gotta eat yer veggies!

Perodian

Posted by Perodian 2 years ago Report

What's she getting credit for?

BrightSideDown

Posted by BrightSideDown 2 years ago Report

prolly taste

Wubbachoochoo

Posted by Wubbachoochoo 2 years ago Report

im usually meh about preds eating defenceless prey, but this feels a bit wrong

BrightSideDown

Posted by BrightSideDown 2 years ago Report

Vore itself is wrong, but don't people who have disabilities that are into the kink deserve some attention too though lol

Muryoku

Posted by Muryoku 2 years ago Report

Equal opportunity digestion <3

Aces

Posted by Aces 2 years ago Report

tbh we don't have enough of this kind of content and I know people who would greatly enjoy it because they *are* disabled and this pushes their buttons extra because it's relatable.

Even if the relation is being gobbled up by a tall stronk hottie.

BrightSideDown

Posted by BrightSideDown 2 years ago Report

Yessss!

Wubbachoochoo

Posted by Wubbachoochoo 2 years ago Report

yeah fair enough when you put it that way

Jacquelope

Posted by Jacquelope 2 years ago Report

Congratulations, she has split the atom of evil!

JodyBreezy

Posted by JodyBreezy 2 years ago Report

this is incredible already.

Jakester443

Posted by Jakester443 2 years ago Report

Love it. Life isn't fair, and everyone's gotta eat. Thanks for sharing!

Sauvegarde

Posted by Sauvegarde 2 years ago Report

There is no point in chasing food if you're already about to exercise taps head

Ikari

Posted by Ikari 2 years ago Report

Poor gal

Mordecai777

Posted by Mordecai777 2 years ago Report

Oh hell yes

Garber09

Posted by Garber09 2 years ago Report

Damn that mouth internal shot is really good! And I just love that size difference~

BrightSideDown

Posted by BrightSideDown 2 years ago Report

The mouth shot was so fun to draw!

MelancholicRobot

Posted by MelancholicRobot 2 years ago Report

Love the work! Always bring extra pre-workout so you don't becomes someone's protein.

Bright

Posted by Bright 2 years ago Report

Those are some pretty neat internal view in the maw.

BrightSideDown

Posted by BrightSideDown 2 years ago Report

Thanks! I learned from the best haha (cough cough tsavo)

somethingsomething2077

Posted by somethingsomething2077 2 years ago Report

Let's see how much she can do push up later though

SilentViewer

Posted by SilentViewer 2 years ago Report

I love seeing diveristy in vore ANYONE IS A SNACK !!!

liquour

Posted by liquour 2 years ago Report

When pronounce it out loud the title reminds me of Jim Crunch from 'Close Enough'. I kinda like it though

https://youtu.be/xhy5j_Uo6jE

Mostamazingofbaboons

Posted by Mostamazingofbaboons 2 years ago Report

I'm not usually bothered by much but...this just feels wrong to me. Now, don't get me wrong, I ain't sayin' I hate it. Hard to make me hate your art. Just makes me feel a bit uncomfortable seeing a person in a Wheelchair get eaten...not sure why though. The human brain is a fickle thing I suppose.

Edddd

Posted by Edddd 2 years ago Report

when you take into account that her position is usually the one users of this site WANT to be in, then you dont have to feel bad. Vore is wrong for fit and disabled people alike, if anything making a difference between the two is problematic, equal rights of digestion for all.

Aces

Posted by Aces 2 years ago Report

As I said to someone else; I think this kind of content could appear more often because the people who ARE in wheelchairs here in this community can have their cliche "God I wish that were me" moment. :P To paraphrase my earlier statement, it pushes their buttons extra because it's someone like themselves.

Anyone feeling uncomfortable about it I do genuinely suggest that they ought to reevaluate their perspective on the differently abled around us. They aren't helpless. They don't need or want us to pity them. It's demeaning. They just need some accommodations now and then, in order for them to be self sufficient. Such as a handicap access ramp to get into their favorite gym where a muscly amazon may or may not be waiting to scarf them down and churn them into a protein boost. :3c

Basically, the only ones who think this is uncomfortable are people who don't have physical disabilities--at least not to this degree. Not to say anyone is bad for feeling that gut "this is kinda wrong" sensation; but you seriously need not worry about it. Vore is a fictional fetish, for one, and for two, the wheelchair-bound among us will thoroughly enjoy the content even more.

tl;dr Don't worry about it so much! :)

DeerlyDigested

Posted by DeerlyDigested 2 years ago Report

Thanks for allowing me to see this piece in another perspective, Aces, this was very well-put. Definitely helps me feel a bit less bad.

NeroOmukade

Posted by NeroOmukade 2 years ago Report

just gonna say some of the stuff you said is right but also very veerrry fucking wrong. Looking at it through your def just made me hate this pic more honestly, As this shit can be opened up in a whole worse can of worms. Given that again, disabled unwilling prey being eaten and digested and there's nothing they can even do. Not even run away. It's hard to say this is a "good" thing when literally you are fucking with someone who can't even defend themselves. Pretty much like eating a child at that point and saying "I love eating kids." Their may be some people out there who like this picture, and good on them, but for others , at least for myself, this little comic is just a huge pred eating a baby and satisficed with there work of "survival of the fittest"

Aces

Posted by Aces 2 years ago Report

Kids are not consenting adults. Your comparison is wildly invalid and extremely ableist for comparing disabled people to "helpless" kids.

As a person with physical disability myself, maybe check your privilege there.

Espuma8

Posted by Espuma8 1 year ago Report

You are the living W of this entire comment section.

Fatedmeal

Posted by Fatedmeal 2 years ago Report

She had a similar hairstyle to myself. That was oddly the first thing that popped up in my mind when I saw her. It wasn’t the fact that she was a colossal or that the dark-toned predator was salivating as her gaze blazed at me. The stoked embers of hunger reminded me of the accident. A car crash that relegated my body to a wheelchair for the foreseeable future. It is why I was brought here to this fitness center. As part of my rehabilitative therapy. I was supposed to wait for my fitness instructor to guide me through my new muscle-building routine. However, there must have been a mix-up. Right after I rolled myself up to a weight a series of weighty yet precise thuds resonated through the floor. The vibrations traveled up my chair and stimulated the proprioceptor nerve endings of the still feeling parts of my body. Envy sprouted within me when I saw those dark digits, peeking out of her stirrups, scrunch and clench. As if the colossal’s toes were taunting me. The strong and stalwart curves of her rugged calves and thighs widened out to a prodigious set of hips. From there my envy gave way to fear as I saw bristling pounds of abdominal musculature. The girth of the collosal’s hips tapered into slabs of muscle attached to a shapely midriff.

She could crunch me in two.

I instinctively put my hands up as a form of paltry and reactionary defense. But it only seemed to invite the predator to act on her natural impulse. My eyes trail above her hefty melons and I felt her hands grab my sides. My own breasts wiggled pathetically as I was suddenly shoved towards the widened entrance of her mouth. Her oral cavity radiated a stringent heat that grew with every rivulet of saliva that laced over my body.

GLUCK!

My breasts were mashed against the rolled abrasive surface of the collosal’s tongue. Her fleshy uvula dropped and hit me squarely on the face. The overwhelming pungency of her festering breath brought me back to the time that I spent in smoldering metal and exploding gas. Back to the car crash.

SLURRK

What else was I supposed to do in this current situation? As a powerful force dragged me inward to the point that my arms were stolen from the outside world. The collosal’s teeth and cheeks bound the only movable limbs of my body. Meanwhile her plump lips wrapped like a vice around my midriff. Unlike last time, when my fiancé had dragged me out of that smoldering metal that I was crunched up in, there would be no one to pull me out.

GULP

The overpowering squelches and invasive nature of the collosal’s mouth and her gaping throat filled my vision and tactile senses. Just before my eyes and nose stung from the sodden stench that emanated from the mucosal lining of the esophagus. I knew it was too late by this point as only my limp legs remained outside. I had sunk down into the predator’s esophageal lumen. A blistering casing the foreshadowed far grimmer accommodations. The collosal’s heartbeat thundered in my ears as my boated was coated in a slimy film. Lubrication to assist with my descent. My head hit against the entrance of the muscular predator’s stomach by the time that my unfeeling body was slurped up into her mouth.

GULP

In comparison to the moments prior, the next seconds happened relatively swiftly. My body fell and was tugged into an uncomfortable curl into an oblong cavity. Rippled walls clung against my skin as they secreted a stringy liquid that bit at my body. Hydrochloric acid and pepsinogen coated me in a film that conducted the sweltering heat of the organic compacted that my body fully resided in. It would not take long for violaceous lesions to color my body. Sores and ulcers that would peel back for a conduit of erythematous flow. However, whether I would live to that point was another story.

~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~

PWAAH

I heartily exhaled as the last of my prey slithered down my throat as a snug little bulge. I felt the weight of that little handicapable settle down as a gross protuberance underneath my skin. My muscles distended outward, before the natural elasticity of my abs rebounded backward. I could already feel the firm array of sinuous fibers rebound against my sodden meal. Her measly warmth added to my body’s own scalding heat. As one would expect spending time in the gym.
On that note, I dropped my body into the supine position with my hands behind my head.

“Not bad! I’ll give ya some credit.”

I said down to my sweat-shimmering middle. Of course, I was kind enough to say something motivational. After all that is a kindness to be expected when meeting fellow gym-goers. Regardless, of where they are on their physical routine.

“Not sure about this next part though.”

It was also a simply matter of propriety for fellow gym-goers to push others to their limits.

“Brace yourself.”

Mmph~ I’m so lucky that I happened upon this extra helping of protein before my next set.

~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~
Fatedmeal:

Dang I really liked this piece that you made. Not just your art but also the subject matter. As the cruel idea of a wheelchair bound prey has actually been on my mind for about a month. I’m super-stoked to see how this second part plays out.

PokoTheGobbo

Posted by PokoTheGobbo 2 years ago Report

Im sorry for the the joke im about to put out here, there is no malice behind these words. That being said....

Wow, a protein filled veggies snack!

Demicus

Posted by Demicus 2 years ago Report

Ooooh! I've seen that cutie before! Poor thing has terrible luck~

Jackfishproductions

Posted by Jackfishproductions 2 years ago Report

Talk about stealing a person's crutches and uhh... I got nothing

knotbots

Posted by knotbots 2 years ago Report

Meals on wheels lol

Arragon548

Posted by Arragon548 2 years ago Report

Remember to eat your vegetables

FutaPredGwenStacy

Posted by FutaPredGwenStacy 2 years ago Report

Really cool to see a wheelchair user prey! I'm a wheelchair user irl so I'm grateful for this <3

BrightSideDown

Posted by BrightSideDown 2 years ago Report

I'm glad you like it!!

Starbo

Posted by Starbo 2 years ago Report

Great piece, kinda concerning seeing all the ableism in the comments. Disabled folks should be able to be involved and respresented in kink, without their disability being the focus of their existence, and this is a good example of that.

BrightSideDown

Posted by BrightSideDown 2 years ago Report

Yep, I agree!

Rutmen

Posted by Rutmen 2 years ago Report

How is that ableism? They just said that they are uncormfotable with disable people being involved, by your logic someone who doesnt like children in vore is an ageist lol
Also talking about morals here is kind of hypocritical in the first place

Starbo

Posted by Starbo 2 years ago Report

Involving a disabled person in kink is nothing like involving an underage person. Don't infantilize the disabled. As long the person involved is of age and able to consent theres nothing wrong with involving the disabled in sex/fetish works. As a disabled person myself I am not making a moral statement, I'm speaking as someone who doesn't want people like me excluded. I don't even believe the people saying such things are immoral, just that their concern is misplaced.

Rutmen

Posted by Rutmen 2 years ago Report

"Involving a disabled person in kink is nothing like involving an underage person"
For you maybe, but for other people it can be similiar
Im not talking about excluding disabled people, but that someone can not like it, and that's what people said here, but for some reason you took it as if they were saying to exclude disabled

Aces

Posted by Aces 1 year ago Report

Hello. I'm a month late to the discussion but I thought I should chime in anyway. Apologies if it's too late to care.

Please stop comparing disabled people to children. Children are not consenting adults and your comparison is thus wildly invalid, and that is why your comments are abelist and disgusting.

Just seeking to educate people here.

Aces

Posted by Aces 1 year ago Report

Let me be also very clear that it's perfectly fine to dislike something. Like not enjoying M/m doesn't make you homophobic. Not unless you try to rationalize it behind "Guys shouldn't be having sex because it's inherently wrong." Then it's homophobic.

It's the same here. It's not ableist to not like seeing a person in a wheelchair as prey. It's ableist when you do not like it because you think not liking "disabled" people in vore is the same as people not liking when children are in vore.

To reiterate; disabled people are consenting adults. Children are not. We have a word for children involved in sexual fetishes and the word is pedophilia. Now, you don't have to like seeing someone in a wheelchair get eaten, and you're entitled to like what you like (unless what you like involves children, and then we're going to have a problem). But I'm not going to sit by and let this erroneous line of thinking be held without some protest.

I hope this all came off as respectful, since, if I'm not respectful, I doubt anyone would listen.

Rutmen

Posted by Rutmen 1 year ago Report

And how exactly my comments are "ableist" or "disgusting"

Aces

Posted by Aces 1 year ago Report

I think I did a pretty good job of explaining that in my followup comment but please do feel free to reach out if my explanation is still not connecting for you.

Not liking children being involved in a kink isn't ageist, it's called not being a pedophile. It is very much not the same as not liking to see a differently abled person involved in a kink. You don't have to like it, but it's because you chose *that* line of reasoning as *why* you don't like it that makes your comments disgusting and ableist. You're comparing disabled people to children and that's just incredibly wrong.

Rutmen

Posted by Rutmen 1 year ago Report

I wasn't comparing disabled people and children.
Im pretty clearly stated that im not against including disabled people, i simply found it incredibly stupid how the first guy here called everyone ableist for stating their opinion.
Children is just the first thing that popped in my mind, you can change for any different preference
Like if someone says "I dont like women in vore"-it doesnt mean that this person is a sexist lol

Aces

Posted by Aces 1 year ago Report

>I wasn't comparing disabled people and children.

But you were.

>How is that ableism? They just said that they are uncormfotable with disable people being involved, by your logic someone who doesnt like children in vore is an ageist lol

>"Involving a disabled person in kink is nothing like involving an underage person" For you maybe, but for other people it can be similiar.

These are your words, not mine.

>Children is just the first thing that popped in my mind, you can change for any different preference

You could. But that's still not what you chose to compare them to.

You chose to compare a disliking seeing persons with a disability in vore to disliking seeing children in vore. They are not the same. They are nowhere near the same. Had you started with "it's the same as disliking women in vore" I wouldn't be having this kind of discussion with you. Instead I would have just informed you that the other people who are outraged have instead made comparisons to children.

The thing is, you're not the only one to make exactly this same comparison. Funny how it's always children. Almsot no one is comparing to "I don't like vore with (insert gender)" and instead all of the most outraged comments compare it to vore with children. Why? Because in their heads, a disabled person is little more than a helpless child. That is why it is a disgusting and ableist way of thinking. Disabled people are not helpless children. The fact that so many people here consciously or unconsciously think that way is a genuine problem that I've been trying to highlight to the people who are throwing spite at this artist.

It's perfectly valid to not like something just because it's not your cup of tea. You feel a sense of mild to extreme disgust, and you move on.

But people are not feeling disgust. They are feeling anger. Why? Because they see a disabled person who they think is helpless *like a child* being brutally devoured by an Amazon lady in a vore comic.

These things are not the same. Like I don't like seeing female characters with dicks but that doesn't make me transphobic. If I were transphobic, I would be getting actively angry at seeing dick girls instead of just saying, "Yeah that's not really my thing" and ignoring it.

It is irrefutable. What you are saying is not true. If it were true, there would not be OUTRAGED comments here responding to this art. They would just ignore it and move on. But instead, they have been triggered to feel the need to write something angry about it, expressing how upsetting it is, or how wrong it is, or how fucked up it is. You should scroll through the other comments to see what I mean.


For the record, I do genuinely hope that none of what I am saying comes off as overly hotheaded or disrespectful. I am genuinely just trying to highlight what I perceive to be missed by your opinions on the subject. If I sound like a dick, I apologize, since I'm not trying to bitch you out like some Twitter SJW. I am just trying to explain, as a person with disability myself, how and why everyone is reacting so badly to this art, and why it's a harmful problem despite their good intentions.

NeroOmukade

Posted by NeroOmukade 2 years ago Report

damn eating a handicapped person. that is....actually really fucking fucked up. Like real hard level, even for hard vore that shit is messed the fuck up. Fantasy or not, for me this is some really evil moral fucked up shit. great artwork as always but just....wrong awful vibes

BrightSideDown

Posted by BrightSideDown 2 years ago Report

To each their own, buddy.

SherlokKirya

Posted by SherlokKirya 2 years ago Report

Alright I generally enjoyed this comic. VERY much and glad you tried out "working out with full gut" trope. It's really fun eh ?
But I have to say, pose in the last panel - mwah. So good. But overal artstyle, maw shot in this one. I can CLEARLY see your art style evolving and I couldn't be happier than to be a witness of your artistic growth. Keep it up !

BrightSideDown

Posted by BrightSideDown 2 years ago Report

Yep! The mawshot was so fun to do haha

Aces

Posted by Aces 1 year ago Report

Very bold and immense respect to the artist to *not* delete the controversial comments.

As a result, this goes a little bit further than a normal fetish piece would into being a more powerful piece of art. Not to sound pretentious or anything. But look how it got people thinking.

BrightSideDown

Posted by BrightSideDown 1 year ago Report

Thank you! I took the opportunity to do this commission because I thought it would be good for representation haha. I kind of had a feeling there would be discourse over this piece, but I don't believe in deleting comments. Everyone has a say.

Ziedine

Posted by Ziedine 1 year ago Report

did she just swallow a disabled person !?

PreyConsumer

Posted by PreyConsumer 1 year ago Report

As a disabled person, thank you thank you thank you for finally giving out community a little bit of recognition, you know how hard it is to find any kind of fetish art of it without it being infanticied? Anyways, sorry about the ableist in other comments :( your art is amazing dude.

BrightSideDown

Posted by BrightSideDown 1 year ago Report

Np! I'm glad you like it haha

Jimmies

Posted by Jimmies 2 months ago Report

This is really cool! NGL - I feel especially bad for the girl being eaten, but rather than pitying her, it's more because she's immediately humanized - she's a wheelchair user in workout gear at the gym, there's instantly more of a story behind her than many prey characters get.

Love how the pred talks to her as an equal too - as brutal as the sequence is, the acknowledgement of her fellow gym-goer is a nice touch.

BrightSideDown

Posted by BrightSideDown 2 months ago Report

This means a lot. Ty!!!