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The arc has ended. The one behind it was found and sentenced. Now I think I leave this series for while. Pretty much tired and not having a clear goal for the future. Until then, I'll make one-shots. Take care ;)
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Posted by Mechdragon1k 2 years ago Report
I did not think Lami hated her brother.
Posted by Nomad3628 2 years ago Report
What makes you think that?
Posted by Mechdragon1k 2 years ago Report
Her trying to train the servant to be a good dragon servant, she took him eating her servant calmly.
Do you think Alorex would ever visit his sister again.
Posted by Nomad3628 2 years ago Report
That exile meant to be lonely for the rest of her life. So the answer is no.
Posted by Mechdragon1k 2 years ago Report
Considering what solitude does to a human mind, and I am not sure if dragons are different, that might be a fate worse than death. Granted she does have sources of mental stimulus so she might find some happiness unlike those in solitary confinement. I liked lami as a character, and was hoping to see her bond with her brother with a bit of culture clash.
Posted by Mechdragon1k 2 years ago Report
What do you think would happen if she did succeed in killing her brother, what would of she done with his servant and would she regretted it at all.
Posted by Nomad3628 2 years ago Report
Not at all. Although she would be not happy about assassinating Alo, she might enjoy Ilina as a pet
Posted by Mechdragon1k 2 years ago Report
I would like more one shots of surprise mercy in the setting. I love the concept of a dragon surprise endoing or deciding to keep a human as a pet while digesting humans in front of him.
I love a vorish tyrant, who has a soft spot for one person who shocked by the soft spot.
Posted by Nomad3628 2 years ago Report
https://aryion.com/g4/view/819035 but I give another story soon but not in that same setting
Posted by MasterGryph 1 year ago Report
All this buildup of Lami as a villain and she's dealt with by, effectively, a tertiary protagonist and a minor antagonist?
Among other things, this makes Alo seem very weak for not confronting her before the assassinations. Can we even call him a protagonist at this point?
Posted by Nomad3628 1 year ago Report
Nobody knew that she was behind all of this. And Lami talked with him at some point and made the impression she wasn't mad. And because of the attack, Alo was sent into another kingdom until things calm down
Posted by MasterGryph 1 year ago Report
Still, it shows that he'd let his morals slide for no reason, and means he had no involvement in the defeat of what should have been a very personal enemy.
Posted by Nomad3628 1 year ago Report
I appreciate your criticism. You pointed out something fairly.
Posted by MasterGryph 1 year ago Report
To be clear, I don't mind Rogalion having a display of competence. I mind the timing of it. It seems like it will take several chapters before Alo can realize that it was a mistake to not avenge Liila on Lami, and Lami is being rushed offstage forever so that he never can.
Posted by Nomad3628 1 year ago Report
Ilina if I may correct it
Posted by MasterGryph 1 year ago Report
Sorry, my mistake.
Posted by Nomad3628 1 year ago Report
Would you feel better if I bring the two characters together at one time to confront each other?