Posted by Tuck4096 1 year ago Report

So in what way do you mean by Weiss getting curvier?

Posted by MessiahDev26 1 year ago Report

Bigger chest and rump my good sir

Posted by TheCyberEmpire 1 year ago Report

I've only been reading about 25% of the story and I'm already seeing Nora and Pyrrha vore, I love it! :D

I was expecting Nora to start being gassy after eating and swallowing Ren, but I was NOT expecting Pyrrha to be the gassy one! :O I'm a Pyrrha simp and seeing her not only swallow Cardin and having her gut to become a gurgling, groaning, sloshy and noisy stomach, but seeing her belch a lot makes this story even better! I dare to imagine what you would do with fancy and beautiful ladies like Cinder and Glynda in the future! >W<

Are Youtube links allowed in comments? If so, then the moment I saw Pyrrha vore and the Redheaded Champion belching loudly and gassy in the story makes me listen to this while reading the Pyrrha vore part! >W<

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=48hO2Xf5be0 ((If anybody is wondering, this is a Pyrrha and Nora Vore Audio by Vore Edits! :3))

Posted by Goldendevil21 1 year ago Report

Thanks again for a new chapter.

Really liked the part Nora ate Ren. That moment felt earned from the work of the previous chapter where Nora had to struggle with devouring others.

And did enjoy Pyrrha digesting Cardin Windchester from a primal point of view. He was not a character in the original show, more of a stereotypical bully. So, no emotional connection to see him gone. And was so fun to read how Pyrrha's belly would slowly shrink over the chapter. Though did find it weird how the gentle Pyrrha was so okay with killing fellow huntsmen. Did enjoy how the other characters took notice of her killing Cardin. How Weiss described it as, "A bit excessive." Makes the death feel real rather than just a throwaway joke. Back to the more primal perspective, really disappointed he did not add to Pyrrha's breasts or ass.

Really enjoyed the part Ruby ate Jaune so she and Pyrrha can get on top of a flower meadow for Pyrrha and Jaune to talk. He doesn't have a semblance that can more easily carry him up the cliff, so makes sense Ruby would eat him. And also liked how the Grimm actually showed up as Jaune was depressed from having to depend on the ladies to keep him safe. This is actually a problem I have with the show itself. Why is he so macho? If they were going to base Jaune off of Sokka, why didn't they follow his journey? Originally starting out as the tough macho man because their was no one else in his village that he could compare to. It makes sense he is so protective, even a little chivalrous, to his sister and village. Yet here, their is no reason not to accept help from Pyrrha when she offers it. He cheated to get into Beacon and knows he is a cheater.

Did enjoy the battle between Nora and Yang verses Ruby and Pyrrha. How both sides fought well but Ruby and Pyrrha had the superior teamwork. The battle actually subverted my expectations a little where no one was eaten. Good job.

Loved the part Jaune would cut a hole into the Griffin holding him and Pyrrha. To me, this shows that as powerful as swallowing their prey in one hit is, this is not a one size fits all situations. Their are dangers to having your enemy with a knife/blade in your belly.

Also loved how sexy it was having Coco, Velvet, Weiss, and Blake all crowd Ruby's belly. My favorite was Weiss and Blake pushing against each others naked bodies while trying to make space for themselves. What a sexy scene to end the chapter on.