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The fourth chapter is live! This one focuses more on the team and their shenanigans, as well as an interesting plot twist near the end~
It's quite a long chapter so make sure to get some popcorn, hopefully the next chapters won't be as long as this lol
Anywho, have a good read as always!
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Posted by nico240 1 year ago Report
Yes I LOVE YOU
Posted by jyoster 1 year ago Report
Well that was quick.
Posted by nico240 1 year ago Report
one question will there be some kind of ship like ruby x wiess, ruby x yang, ruby x blake or others
Posted by jyoster 1 year ago Report
Things are currently brewing as far as potential shipping is concerned. We're keeping an open mind at the moment, but it will be interesting.
Posted by R4d6 1 year ago Report
I hope Ruby and Weiss manage to find the occasion to eat Cardin & his team, or some other crooks~
Posted by Hibben 1 year ago Report
I'd imagine they would be tasty with a bit of sap on them, out in the forest where there's no witnesses.
And the White fang at the docks are probably fair game, even if Blake may have some objections.
Posted by nico240 1 year ago Report
my favorite scene in this story is when ruby and weiss fight over who eats who
Posted by jyoster 1 year ago Report
Yeah, that was fun to do.
Posted by Davyjones 1 year ago Report
Very nice. Object vore is highly underrated in my opinion and now with the other gals possibly joining in makes me very eager to see where this story is going.
Posted by Goldendevil21 1 year ago Report
Thanks for another chapter. And so quick too.
Still not completely sure why Weiss is granted immunity from Ruby's digestive belly. Still, is a fun and sexy sequence.
And did enjoy the expansion of mechanics where Weiss can use her Glyphs to 'climb' out of Ruby. Assuming Ruby offers no resistance. Feels like a cool mechanic where if Ruby is ever unconscious, Weiss might be able to escape Ruby on her own. Or maybe Weis can't climb out of an unconscious Ruby. Either way, a cool mechanic.
And did enjoy the small prank of Yang waking up Ruby by placing the alarm as loud as possible right next to Ruby's ear. That did feel like a prank a sibling would do. And also like how Blake was the one most annoyed by the loud noise. Showing that she has sensitive hearing.
And also enjoyed the conversation between Ruby and Blake about the book, Ninjas of Love. Not only a cool reference to the show. Also liked how Ruby was getting really soaked into the book and they both had an awkward conversation after Ruby read it.
Not sure on Weiss being so open to sleeping in Ruby. Wanted that to be more gradual but this is still good. Was a fun spin on the bunk bed situation.
Ruby eating the bed was a little weird for me. On one hand, love how big her belly grew and the burps that happened. On the other, does feel like her belly is invincible. Nothing can harm it.
Though did enjoy how Weiss was eating a lot of food. That was great as we see a character clearly obsessed with her thin figure now glutting herself. All in an attempt to make her a bigger meal for Ruby. And this makes sense. Ruby ate a giant Nevermore. Compared to that, Weiss is a tootsie pop. And Weiss wants to be a filling meal. Either to help Ruby or to boost her own ego at being a good meal.
Though my favorite part, story wise (not vore wise), was Nora showing team RWBY stuffing Ren's arm into her mouth. To me, this shows a person with no talent like Ruby in the art of devour trying to succeed. Not immediately being given success and instead having to work for it.
And greatly enjoyed how immobile Ruby is after eating that Boarbatusk. Yeah, that Grimm was huge. It should weigh her down and love this. This shows that Ruby needs protection as her belly slowly digests its large prey. She can't simply get up after eating a Nevermore.
Also enjoyed Ruby not eating Professor Peaches and Cardin Windchester. To me, that does a great job showing that Ruby is not consumed by hunger. She is still a huntress and not a monster constantly devouring everything in front of her.
Also liked the little detail of Prrha and Weiss being awkward around the other after the previous chapter of accidentally sharing a kiss. That helps connect the chapters to feel like a continued story.
And now that you added it, can't believe the original story did not expand on Vale. Ruby and Yang would know what it is like to have fun. Simply going to carnival rides and playing video games. Weiss and Blake are from separate regions and had much different childhoods to the two sisters. Having fun is something they are not used to yet desperately need. Even led to a funny and sexy moment of Weiss accidentally eating Ruby.
If I did have one more minor complaint, am a bit sad that Ruby's body did not expand after digesting that Boarbatusk. Wanted to read how her bust and hips were straining the fabric. Or how Ruby would pout and want to stop by the gym to work off the weight.