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Hey everyone!
So, I reviewed some of the feedback for this series and I've taken some suggestions on-board for how to move this series to its finale.
Hope you enjoy this one!
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Posted by Ninebreaker 1 year ago Report
So, the quality of this one was still good, it did feel a little lacking. I'd say it is because you're just alluding to him playing with his prey, rather than writing it out like you did more in the series beginning. Still can't wait to see more.
Posted by pizza3695 1 year ago Report
I think that's very fair. I'm trying to close this series out as I'm not happy with how it's developed, so I did feel this one was somewhat lacklustre. I hope that the next one in the series is a bit better. :)
Posted by Houyo 1 year ago Report
Seeing you upload stuff is always bittersweet cause I want to read it but I'm so far behind on your stories it's daunting. XD Haven't even started the mind over matter ones yet but always love how you write casual fatal M/F.
Posted by pizza3695 1 year ago Report
Only way for them ;)
Posted by gtgod 1 year ago Report
That was awesome!
Wish i could that to a lot of cheerleaders.
Can i suggest, on his way to the celebs, he goes to a dance party and vores girls in multiple ways after dancing with them? And maybe shrinks 2 or 3 of them to squirm in his balls on his way out?