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Connor just moved to Brussels to start a new job and has his first golden elf encounter on his commute home. Followed by a crash course on golden elf customs.
This story is based on this great piece https://aryion.com/g4/view/773407 from Frakass. I can't thank him enough for not only making awesome stuff but also letting me use his characters and taking time to give me feedback to keep this story within the golden elf canon. If you're here I can't imagine you haven't seen his work but if not, go check it out.
I had a blast writing it. Golden elves are awesome.
Of course, would love to hear your thoughts and feedback.
-Scat Warning for the end-
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Posted by ggg74 1 year ago Report
Very impressive
Posted by Mucsf95 1 year ago Report
Thank you!
Posted by Frakass 1 year ago Report
I love it!
Thanks again for this great story and so accurate depiction of Lyria, one of my favorite O.C. ^^
Posted by Mucsf95 1 year ago Report
Once again, so glad you liked it and that I could do well by your characters :).
Posted by tgawsome 1 year ago Report
That was a fun read!
You really nailed the charm of Frakass's world and their characters quirks.
10 out 10 story!
Posted by Mucsf95 1 year ago Report
Thank you! He definitely helped a lot with getting it right.
Posted by Indighost 1 year ago Report
Good story, although could use a dash more description. lots of good scenes!
Posted by Mucsf95 1 year ago Report
Thanks for the compliments and feedback! Description definitely feels like a weak point of mine. I've gotta find a way to start improving on it.
Posted by Indighost 1 year ago Report
A few detail questions occurred to me during the story. (and this is one of my fetishes obviously lol). Are monnie's nipples pink or brown? Just knowing that detail would add fun to the story.
Posted by Mucsf95 1 year ago Report
Damn. You're right. Can't believe I forgot to include that. I've got to make sure the image in my head is actually on the page. Btw she's definitely got fat pink nipples.
Would you mind telling me other areas you felt could use that extra detail? I'd like to keep those and similar spots in mind in the future.
Posted by Yumyum18 1 year ago Report
Aww, this was adorably sexy.
I'm glad you're writing again and can't wait to read more sexy works about goddesses and the lucky guys who worship them
Posted by Mucsf95 1 year ago Report
Thank you! I'm going to try to focus on writing again for awhile so hopefully you'll have some more things from me to read soon :)
Posted by oakheart19 1 year ago Report
Another fantastic story
Posted by Mucsf95 1 year ago Report
Thank you :)
Posted by SplendiferousFinch 1 year ago Report
Definitely love the casual hyperscat parts of this story. Hopefully we get more like it in the future! <3
Posted by Mucsf95 1 year ago Report
Thanks! It was fun to write too.
Posted by SplendiferousFinch 1 year ago Report
Hopefully your next story involves the the Ttrucilian shop bureau of reclamations (https://aryion.com/g4/view/192028). And how the humans there are disposed of <3.
Posted by Mucsf95 1 year ago Report
Oh that's fun. It's a possibility! You never know :)
Posted by SplendiferousFinch 1 year ago Report
<3 <3 <3
Posted by Fortheloveoflarge 1 year ago Report
I love anything you upload, but youur writing is my absolute favorite! Sorry it took so long for me to comment.
Posted by Mucsf95 1 year ago Report
Thanks for the continued support! And don't be sorry. It's nice when all the comments aren't in the first day :)
Posted by Dragr 1 year ago Report
Hi! Great story as always! Sorry for asking, but when will you continue to write a Liadel story? It is my favorite so far from you. I have to ask as well, but do you also write comissions? I would be interested in one from you.
Posted by Mucsf95 1 year ago Report
Thanks! Writing time has been unfortunately scarce for me lately. The next Liadel chapter is started but definitely no time line on it. And partly due to my lack of time to write I don't take commissions. But you can PM me an idea and we can discuss it. If I like it I'll add it to my list of ideas. Also if requests for updates on my stories are generously spaced out enough i don't mind them, so no need to apologize :) id just say send those to my pms too, I prefer to keep the comment sections on a story about the story.