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Tags: accidental death aligator aligator pred blackmail body envy Bone Disposal Bones Bones in scat Disposal Fatal Female Pred Female Prey filmed flashback Forum gator gator pred gopher Implied Digestion implied scat Implied Vore interview low self-esteem Male Pred Male Prey masturbating Masturbation mature pred mature woman messaging Multiple Preds Pig pig pred Porno Remembering remembering the prey Rodent Scat Social Media Suspense teasing teasing prey world building Young pred young prey
Sorry but it is a little hard to skip mentions of scat in this story, but it's only mentions! No actual detail in this one.
Part 2 - https://aryion.com/g4/view/917262
Here is part 1 of a story that I've been taking too much time on! There isn't a lot in terms of sex and vore yet, but there is a whole lot of thinking about and alluding to it!
This story is the start to the real meat of Linda's story, so there is a lot of world building and character info dumping. A lot of which will come into play for other characters I have plans for. Also introduce another major character in the overarching setting, who'll you see a lot more of in part 2!
I have the whole story finished, but have been taking so long I figured I would edit the first part and post it, and finish editing the second later. Both parts are about the same length, though this one is heavy in lore while the other is heavy in steamy goodness. Once both parts are finished, I think I'll post the complete story all in once, hopefully with a bit more polish than the separate pieces.
I hope you all enjoy it, I've had so much fun with writing this. Been a great challenge to try and build up suspense. Hopefully it worked out alright. I always appreciate comments and messages!
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Posted by VexerHoodie 1 year ago Report
Kimmy is a delight! I love how she’s painted as a bona-fide degenerate, and that’s saying a lot Hhaha! The origin story of Linda is a big highlight. The IRC framing is delicious.
Posted by HedoroMonogatari 1 year ago Report
I had a lot of fun writing her perspective! There might even be more of her in the future in some way, but I'll keep that as just an idea for now. When I edit the story further into a single piece, I want to fix up the IRC part with better formatting and font, but I'm glad that it came through!
Posted by juicefox 1 year ago Report
I really love the worldbuilding and pacing of this story. Modern mundane worlds are my favourite settings for vore stories and you do it very well.
Posted by HedoroMonogatari 1 year ago Report
Thank you for the comment! I'm happy to hear my pacing and setting are enjoyable. I'm a big fan of modern and mundane too! I really enjoyed your text adventure game, so I think we have some shared tastes!
Posted by alittletrolling 1 year ago Report
I finally got around to reading this and hoo boy! What a fantastic story! Kimmy and Linda are both terrible people, but in COMPLETELY different ways! Kimmy is a degenerate with no respect for anyone's privacy or life, and Linda is a monster with no respect for anyone's well being! The two clash, they meet, and it goes up in flames, as it should! Amazing stuff!
I love the use of chat rooms in your stuff, too! The way you count the characters to make it more realistic, the way you make their typing style slightly different, just a great work!
Posted by HedoroMonogatari 1 year ago Report
Thank you! I spent a bit too long in the editing phase counting characters lol! And yeah I really wanted to show another side of Linda in that was touched on in her first story, and I'm glad that the idea of her and Kimmy having similarities came through.
Posted by alittletrolling 1 year ago Report
Yeah! Like you teased the idea of kimmy maybe becoming a pred like Linda, and I dont have time at the moment to read your story but im assuming kimmy dies VERY soon. But still, the way you made it sexual in nature but still subtly reminded us how fucked up everything is was so intelligent!
Posted by Loadingbacon 2 months ago Report
Lmao, hilarious Linux callout, But seriously...
Great story, LOVE the use of technology; references to unsavory forums, bot accounts and networking, older people typically gravitating towards older social medias like facebook, even the shear mentioning of a terminal/terminal commands is a great detail also just showing a great understanding of internet culture as a whole
And for Kimmy I really like that she was just a Deviant onlooker rather than wanting to be eager prey and acting out some fantasy super refreshing to see.
Posted by HedoroMonogatari 2 months ago Report
I'm very happy that you enjoyed my story! I tried my best to be authentic with the techy mumbo jumbo without it becoming too overbearing. Fun for those that know or don't know the general concepts while still serving the story. I'm glad you liked Kimmy too! She was a joy to write about.