Posted by TheCyberEmpire 1 year ago Report

I've finished reading the epilogue...And WOOOOOOOOOOOOOOWWWW! This is by far the BEST chapter to this RP turned story! :D

The gassiness and the massive bellies of Ruby, Coco and Pyrrha was awesome and very SEXY! Especially the latter with the Amazon eating 6 people at the beach, making her gut massive and certainly gassy~ And before that with her eating the rest of CRDL's 3 members, causing the Champion's gut to be...Not as big in the present, but still lovely all the same! Pyrrha becoming a dangerous predator and being VERY gassy to what she did to CRDL and the unlucky 6 people at the beach makes me very happy and excited, and I can't wait to see how the Champion's gut will be if she ate MORE then 6 and being EXTREMELY gassy! >W<

Coco is a lovely lady as well and I'm glad to see her becoming yet another predator with a large stomach and the gassiness behind it. :3 I do wonder...Who will Velvet's prey will be once she became a predator finally? Will it be a random person in Vale? A Beacon Student? Or another bully harming her? ((Actually, not the last one since Pyrrha will just eat the bully/meal and be happy afterwards. :3))

When I first saw Voreception in the tags, I IMMEDIATELY got back to eating and enjoy my time, imagining who will be swallowing who in a predator's stomach, and seeing Weiss having a Rose Meal after being swallowed by Coco makes this story 10X better. I always do love Weiss Vore besides Pyrrha and other preds in this story. Weiss going on a stuffing binge near the end makes this a nice touch. :>

And Ruby...The fight scene between her, Coco, Velvet and Pyrrha against the Grimm is a cool fight and her eating the Grimm at the end is amazing as always, being gassy is the creampie up top! :] I loved the ending as well, a good combination of sexy, wholesomeness and gassiness. ((The last one on Ruby's part.)) ^w^

...I JUST realized how big this comment is and the the sentenced I talked about the most is about Pyrrha. :O But the Redheaded champion is a favorite character of mine, so what can I say? XD

There HAS to be a side story about how Coco encountered the White Fang and her eating them, because I'm curious to what happened...And about how many members she ate. x3 Same goes for Pyrrha since I REALLY want to see the Amazon devour the last 5 people in detail and her belching out LOUDLY with her gut gurgling and groaning nice and loud. >W<

VERY sorry for the big comment, and jyoster if you're seeing/reading this, will there be art for Pyrrha's gassy and gluttonous act to both CRDL and the aftermath of her eating 6 people? Also for Coco for eating Ruby a after...'Dealing' with the White Fang? :]

I don't have any money sadly to pay for commissions for the 2 vore scenes with the Gassy Champion, Coco's vore scenes, Ruby, and the voreception with Coco, Ruby and Weiss. ;w;

And after ALL of that! I HEAVILY enjoy this epilogue! :3

Posted by jyoster 1 year ago Report

Glad to hear that you liked the chapter. And yeah, Pyrrha in particular was very fun to write for.

As for the art, I'll have to see how I can organize my schedule, as I don't think I can do each drawing so quickly. But one of them at least maybe.

The story ideas are promising. May just go into detail on how Pyrrha has fun with the civilians in a separate chapter over on my page. No promises, but you got me in a good mood.

Posted by TheCyberEmpire 1 year ago Report

Okay! I'll await those future drawings of yours in the future! ^w^

Since Vore day is coming up, perhaps the Pyrrha Vore scene with either the 3 members of CRDL or the 6 people at the beach, or both will be perfect along with the story ideas! Of course, it's up to you to draw and write, and I'm still trying to find my art style, so I can't draw the scenes myself. ;w;

Glad to hear that! :D :3

Posted by jyoster 1 year ago Report

Mhmm.
Also, no promises I'll get this done by Vore Day, but I am writing a little story featuring the latter. Don't think I have time to make a drawing to go alongside it, sadly.

Posted by TheCyberEmpire 1 year ago Report

It's alright! Perhaps if you have time in the future, you can do the drawing! It doesn't have to be finished quickly. ^w^

Posted by jyoster 1 year ago Report

Thanks.

Posted by TheCyberEmpire 1 year ago Report

Forgot to mention this in my last comment, but while I was reading this epilogue, I was hearing/watching the Pyrrha and Nora Vore Audio by Vore Edits once again. =w= ((I said once again because I don't remember if I was hearing/watching the video while reading the chapter with Pyrrha's first meal being Cardin before. Might have to go back and find the chapter. X3))

Posted by TheCyberEmpire 1 year ago Report

This is the link to the video. :3 ((Once again, I don't remember putting in the link last time! Sorry! ;w;))

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=48hO2Xf5be0

Posted by jyoster 1 year ago Report

Just saw it, and I certainly loved it.

Posted by TheCyberEmpire 1 year ago Report

Me too! And here is another RWBY one, except Ruby and Glynda vore is in this one. >:3

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=H8kaym7kwjk

Posted by jyoster 1 year ago Report

Hehe, lovely~

Posted by Aknaught 1 year ago Report

Okay, so multiple things.
1: Great chapter, definitely worth the wait. Can't wait to see my girl Velvet getting her 'pred' on
2: Is this going to be a purely fem pred story? Or is there hope for Jaune and Ren to get in on the pred action?
3: Speaking of our blonde knight, everyone else is hooking up, when's my boy gonna find love?
4: I am definitely glad I'm watching this because this has become a favorite series of mine to re-read. Keep at it!

Posted by jyoster 1 year ago Report

It's going to be primarily F/pred focused. I wouldn't be opposed to having male preds, but we haven't discussed this yet. Just that the story is shaping up to be as is at the moment, we'll have to see.

And yeah, Jaune is going to have to work hard to get someone to love.

Posted by Fffhhg 1 year ago Report

Hello, what a thumbnail in your profile?

Posted by Egads 1 year ago Report

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Posted by nick222238 1 year ago Report

Huh, they were pretty casual about Pyrrah eating and digesting innocents. None of them really cared about their deaths.

Posted by Hibben 1 year ago Report

The setting only works if they are casual about eating people. Besides, Pyrrah learned her lesson.

Either be more discreet so Ruby doesn't know, or cash in on being a celebrity and eat her adoring fans.

Posted by jyoster 1 year ago Report

Pff! I like that you neglected the possibility of her trying to stop eating innocents all together.

But yeah, Pyrrha is on a slippery slope at this point.

Posted by Chupathingy1990 1 year ago Report

Love how Pyrrha snuffed out a bunch of people and no one really bats an eye

Posted by Goldendevil21 1 year ago Report

Thanks once again for a great chapter and do not mind the wait between chapters. Plenty of other artwork to keep us vore fans entertained. And sorry for not reviewing earlier. Was a long chapter so not sure if I would catch everything.

Love the little dream at the beginning. For one, shows Yang caring for her little sister. She could have died yesterday. Nothing more than pudge on that red dress wearing harlot. Yet also showed a darker side of Yang where there is a part of her that enjoys it when people are digested and added to your figure.

Also just really enjoyed the small banter between characters. The original show really dropped the ball in make these characters feel like seventeen-year-old teenagers who are all friends. Where was the excitement for summer break? Where is the friendly banter between teammates? Thankfully, this story makes the characters all feel like friends.

The jealousy Weiss and Coco have for Ruby’s affection was a bit heavy-handed though. Was just super obvious.

And now for Pyrrha. Now, not going to lie, her characterization really divided me in this story. On one hand, is super sad to see Pyrrha’s more gentle side disappear. Replaced by a gluttonous monsters. Yet on the other, you did a great job sliding me into this new Pyrrha. In a previous chapter, she fully digested Cardin. This was not to teach him a lesson but instead to fill her belly. So, when she goes after his team of her own free will, is completely believable she would do this. And later when she eats a bunch of random swimmers, that also matches her new character. But like I said, I miss that gentler Pyrrha of the past. The one who always tried to do the right thing and did her best to help Jaune.

Also liked the return to the arcade. Really showing them as teenagers who want to have fun. Even led to sexy vore with Coco eating Ruby and Weiss.

Also really enjoyed the part where they explored the island of Patch. Capturing that feeling of adventure. Especially when they fought a Ziraph that ate Coco and Velvet. First off, thanks so much for making this Grimm an actual threat. It did not go down in one swallow by Ruby and instead, the huntresses needed to weaken the Grimm before attempting that. Was also great to see the return of immobile Ruby who once again, had eyes bigger than her stomach. Her friends needing to once more guard her as her belly digested the Grimm inside.

Aso love the ending of Ruby eating everyone in her room as a sleepover. Very well executed.

Also, thanks for making a reference to Taiyang. While not the most important character, was great to see him banter with Ruby to show that his little, beautiful, monster has destroyed beds with how much she has eaten before. Really making the vore feel like Ruby has possessed it for years.