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A kobold named Iris is out with one of her friends for some drinks, but a little frame like hers needs some food too... next thing she knows, she's in the fanciest, most expensive restaurant in town, staring down the most delicious girl she's ever seen... Sydney can pay for that, right?
It's one in the morning and guess who's not asleep~
This one's hot off the... keyboard? I had it started, right to the point where Sydney starts eating, but -spoilers- male prey isn't really my thing, so I hadn't finished it. Fortunately, Sydney isn't the main character, so she can deal with getting a bit less attention. Iris is, and I know I liked how I described her meal cause I was drooling a little bit imagining her.
I like the idea of worlds where the people just... don't design the plumbing for preds, and preds have to find a way to work around their diet's aftermath... it adds a bit of flavor to the world.
Totally unrelated, but it is a bugger getting good art of a nonhuman race from an AI. I don't even know how many images I scrapped finding one I was happy having for Iris... dozens, I think.
I hope you all enjoy! I know that people liked my last piece with size difference and meaty prey, but this one's got a bit different setting going. If you like it, leave me a comment! Tell me what you love, tell me what you hate, tell me about that one typo in paragraph seven I skimmed over every time I read it! Heck, tell me about your day if you want, I just like comments!
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Posted by unicorn 1 year ago Report
Kobold preds are a lot of fun :D
I love how nonchalant Iris is about her friend getting taken away for being unable to pay heh...
I have to ask... you're not planning to do commissions anytime are you? I get the impression you write mostly for self indulgence (which is perfectly fine of course!) and you'd rather not, but - if you ever wanted to i would be super interested!
Posted by PaperWriter 1 year ago Report
I'm just going to... delete my first attempt at a reply, and try for something more coherent, since I hadn't really thought on it prior to your comment.
Am I interested in doing commissions? Yes
Am I sure I COULD do them? Not entirely, no
As you noted, I am quite used to writing for myself, the only experience I have writing for others is a english classes and a few writing classes, and I never got to do, you know, INTERESTING things for those.
I also haven't written pieces using others' characters in quite some time, simply because I never felt sure I was capturing the characters right, though in a commission environment there is the commissioner to answer that.
So... I could try? I've never interacted with commissions from either end, so I don't honestly know what I can and can't promise in regards to my writing speed or price or any of that.
Hopefully this came out more coherent than my first try at a response, but commissions are basically something I know nothing about so maybe it isn't.
The other half of your comment... heh. It wasn't the first time Sydney's belly got her into trouble, but it might have been the first time she had no way to escape the consequences. Kind of inevitable, so Iris wasn't too surprised it finally happened.