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(COMM) Addie At The Golden By PaperWriter -- Report

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I... I just... I don't know what to say here...

Like, I knew commissions are a thing, that established artists/writers do. I knew I made this gallery to share my work, and I guess also establish myself as a writer... my brain just never clicked those two things together, so... big thanks to unicorn for A: commissioning this piece, and B: not changing his mind when my response to initially being asked about commissions was basically incoherent because I was busy panicking.

Addison "Addie" Park the alpacataur belongs to  unicorn, so does the thumbnail

The story is actually set in the same world and restaurant as my story "Two Friends, Drinks, And Dinner" which I have now named. Named the restaurant, I mean. The Golden. Featuring unicorn's OC Addie the alpacataur -who was a fun pred to write on account of her not being a particularly predatory character- winning a contest for a lovely two-course dinner.

Lot of fun to write, got to mess around with new ideas, so it's gonna read a bit different from my other stuff. (I assume) That said, enjoy!

Now I'm gonna take a break, maaaybe skip an upload, maaaybe not, because I hadn't done a comm before and I might have said I'd do it... faster than I should of, and then held myself to those words... suffice to say that I haven't gotten any more awake since I last complained of being sleep short.

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doomed

Posted by doomed 1 year ago Report

Lmao you’re a pretty good writer so it would behoove ( hehe I can finally use behoove ) you to set expectations for commissions and requests . Plus what’s the harm

PaperWriter

Posted by PaperWriter 1 year ago Report

You made me have to look up a word, it's been a while since that happened.

No harm, really. Everyone I've interacted with on this site has been pretty chill, so getting to sit down and write for people (and earn some bonus money) sounded pretty neat once I though about it.

xvx17

Posted by xvx17 1 year ago Report

Every time I enter a story, I see one of your comments, it seems we have similar tastes haha

doomed

Posted by doomed 1 year ago Report

If that’s the case you should check my faves on here or accounts ,

unicorn

Posted by unicorn 1 year ago Report

Thanks again! Commissioning you was a great experience!

PaperWriter

Posted by PaperWriter 1 year ago Report

It was fun working with you! Looking forward to doing it again!

xvx17

Posted by xvx17 1 year ago Report

Imagining yourself as a writing magician (like in your profile photo) makes a lot of sense to me, since you write things that would never have occurred to me. A while ago I couldn't find a writer who could make me imagine everything in the story in detail, the size of the private rooms, the characters, the lighting and the voices. Everything feels very vivid when it is written correctly. good job.

crispy91

Posted by crispy91 1 year ago Report

Gaaaaaahhhhhh I love it! I’m going to get a job here just on the off chance that I’ll get eaten by Addie <3 long as she’s up for another preggo meal.

PaperWriter

Posted by PaperWriter 1 year ago Report

I mean if you're trying to get eaten by Addie you could always just go find her and ask her to do it

If I hadn't landed so close to the requested word count there was definitely going to be an epilogue of students wondering who their teacher ate, and a student interested in learning the same "lesson" Hazel did

crispy91

Posted by crispy91 1 year ago Report

Yeah but it might be kind of strange… random preggo coming to find her and begging to be eaten. I could just get a job there and move up through the ranks within the company then stage another sweepstakes in which Addie would win then schedule a date and time, remove all other preggo’s from said schedule and demote myself to food and put my profile in the most prominent spot on the menu. That seems a lot simpler to me :p

PaperWriter

Posted by PaperWriter 1 year ago Report

Hmm... time consuming, too much random chance. Start your own restaurant, doesn't even have to be vore themed, send out some opening day invites and a "random" one that gives "the lucky receiver" a free, deluxe meal. I mean, what kind of teacher with a teacher's salary would turn that down? Don't even need to specify what (or, y'know, who) the meal is beforehand, and there you are.

crispy91

Posted by crispy91 1 year ago Report

Yes. The only thing I would really need is a lawyer who knows the ins and outs of incorporation. But that’s ok. I have a buddy who’s a real whizz with this sort of thing and he’s pretty sure he’s got this. I mean the man is a moderator on WikiLaw. Seems pretty legit to me. I probably would make the restaurant not vore-related because the insurance would probably be through the roof. Or not high at all. Either way it feels like it would be a hassle. But the problem is to find someone to take over the restaurant long after I’ve been digested….