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Continuation of Connections
Check the main series from TheDragonBoy and x9comega.
https://aryion.com/g4/view/569713
https://www.deviantart.com/thedragonboy/gallery/71581721/how-not-to-become-lunch
This Spinoff is not Canon.
If anyone has constructive criticism I would gladly hear it.
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Posted by doomed 1 year ago Report
Honestly the only real issue is the grammar . You use certain words that in the context of the sentence , doesn’t fit . It kinda reminds of when a non English speaker tries to speak English
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Also I like the use of the word monster . It seems appropriate
Posted by Nomad3628 1 year ago Report
Your opinion is appreciated
Posted by Archivore 1 year ago Report
What about greg
Posted by Nomad3628 1 year ago Report
next chapter
Posted by Nomad3628 8 months ago Report
ChatGPT might have helped with this issue now. Was it useful?
Posted by Archivore 1 year ago Report
This is a cult. A straight up cult
Posted by Nomad3628 1 year ago Report
I looked into it and saw cults like David Koresh and so on and I decided that I'm not gonna try copy the same thing but to change it a bit.
Posted by Archivore 1 year ago Report
Ok. Good to know