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A short story wherein a young woman dressing up for Halloween is visited by a hungry worm-creature with a trick and a treat of its own in mind!
Hey there readers! This is the first of (hopefully) several shorts I'm planning for the Halloween season. I wish I'd gotten started earlier in the month, but expect at least one more Halloween short before the month is over!
Also, I'm curious if people like (or dislike) this smaller, quicker story format, so don't hesitate to give me your opinion, it's kinda an experimental throw-back to my 'Vignette Theater' days long, long ago.
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Posted by DrakentheBlack 1 year ago Report
It's funny how the worm stripped her in its attempts to catch her. Too bad for Brandi she had to run out of clothes eventually, but that just meant she got a more thorough and intimate experience when the worm ultimately devoured her!
Posted by PrinnyDood 1 year ago Report
Haha, yeah, if she'd been wearing enough layers, she might have been able to delay it long enough to get away.
Posted by swampyslug 1 year ago Report
I liked it. I don't need ten women in a story. If I were to make a request it would be more details, more time, and her being slowly being eaten. But your style is good enough that I eagerly favorite lots of your work and I especially love your feetfirst unwilling worm vore so this is two thumbs up
Posted by Randomdude5 1 year ago Report
I agree with you. I like one girl eaten per story, because it allows the writer to focus on her consumption and digestion, but I assumed that PrinnyDood likes multiple or mass prey, and I don't want to say that someone else's kink is incorrect.
I really like this story too.
Posted by PrinnyDood 1 year ago Report
Glad you like this one!
I do indeed enjoy multiple/mass prey scenarios too, as seen in tons of my work, but I'm certainly not against the smaller-scale situations like this one.
Especially considering how much easier to write this is, compared to one with numerous predators and/or prey.
Posted by PrinnyDood 1 year ago Report
Thanks! While I do very much enjoy the the 'crowd scene' type scenarios in vore, there's certainly something to be said for this type of one-on-one situation too.
And it's a hell of a lot faster and easier to write, so that's a substantial perk.
Posted by V 1 year ago Report
Short and to the point (unfortunately for her). Great mini story!
Posted by PrinnyDood 1 year ago Report
Thank you! It's been a long while since I've tried my hand at these kind of mini-stories, and thus far, I'm surprised at how quickly I can make progress on a smaller-scope scenario like this one.
Posted by Neuro 1 year ago Report
Short, sweet, lovely work. Brandi made for a delicious prey and the implied digestion was executed just right.
Posted by PrinnyDood 1 year ago Report
Thank you! I'm glad this quick-form type of story works for you, since I'm pretty pleased at how efficient it was to create.
Posted by Xali 1 year ago Report
I definitely wouldn't mind more like this.
Posted by PrinnyDood 1 year ago Report
Thanks! Good to know, since it turns out this type of mini-story is a lot easier to produce!
Posted by Nalzindar 1 year ago Report
I like this short story with a sexy girl-meets-a-hungry-creature scenario, easy and straight to the delicious point!
You already have a lot of fascinating creatures in your gallery, perhaps you could revisit a couple of them in your vignette stories. I would love to see a quick update for how some of your predators (and victims!) are faring^^
Posted by PrinnyDood 1 year ago Report
Thanks! It was fun to work on something so relatively quick and simple, as opposed to the longer, multi-scene stuff I usually do.
And yes, I think revisiting some of my critters is certainly a great idea, and as a matter of fact, the Scyllian Thyble-Worm from this story originated in a short from about 12 years ago!
Posted by French_snack 1 year ago Report
*Two* moments when we half-think she might get away, through dodging at the right moment and through luck... and then of course she doesn't. The thyble-worm certainly planned this well. :D
Posted by PrinnyDood 1 year ago Report
I wonder if discardable clothing is actually the worm's weakness? Like how some lizards can ditch their tail to confuse predators. If she'd been wearing a few more layers, perhaps she might have actually been able to escape!
Posted by anais2000 1 year ago Report
It's so nice to see the Scyllian Thyble-Worm again, after "Shower Scene". This time the very distressed (and soon digested) damsel was clothed and feetfirsted. :) The thing I really like about this creature in particular is how suddenly it can appear and the fact that there is no escaping it.
Posted by PrinnyDood 1 year ago Report
Thanks! I had a feeling you'd appreciate the Scyllian Thyble-Worm's return after all this time.
I agree, I like a predator that can just pop up anywhere, and easily follow a lovely lady no matter where she tries to run, even if she locks herself in a vault or something.
There are definitely more fun, untapped scenarios with this creature, so maybe I'll have to bring it back again.