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As previously mentioned, I don't have as much time as I would like to draw or write these days, and it will probably be like this way until Christmas. So here comes a long delayed Halloween story I didn't manage to finish before today. The story doesn't even involve much Halloween themed elements -_-
The characters this time is a couple of girls, Karen and Esmeralda, have been borrowed from a picture I made a couple of years back, "Barnacles".
https://aryion.com/g4/view/579550
The thumbnail picture is not mine.
I hope you nevertheless will enjoy the story and leave a comment : )
Posted by von-de-rush 1 year ago Report
Question, un the description you only mentíon 2 females.
Where Is the males in this history to include the f/m tags?
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Posted by Nalzindar 1 year ago Report
My thought was that when Esmeralda as a snake, ate Brad, this counted as F/M. The female victims are the waitress who also is eaten by Esmeralda in her snake form and the fairy who is swallowed by a frog. I hope this wasn’t too disappointing.
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Posted by johaku99 1 year ago Report
That was a fun read not enough snake transformation the frog vore was a nice surprise too
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Posted by Nalzindar 1 year ago Report
Thanks. Besides from my Xantos series, I haven’t used transformations before, and turning an already created character into a snake seemed fun. The frog vore was a actually something I came up with as a way to turn Esmeralda back by breaking the magic^^
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Posted by johaku99 1 year ago Report
Hey its gold
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Posted by DrakentheBlack 1 year ago Report
I like this story! I really enjoyed the theme of a fairy causing mischief by transforming a girl into a snake who then ate other people. I really expected the change to be permanent, but that it wasn't allowed for that joke at the end. I laughed about the irony of it.
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Posted by Nalzindar 1 year ago Report
Thanks, it is a tradition of having fairies as trouble makers in various folklore, so this one was a nice fit for the occasion. And having the main character unawaringly turn into a predator was fun. I was originally planning to let Esmeralda eat Karen, but because my barnacle picture turned so popular, I replaced her with a random girl in case I decided to continue it : )
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Posted by PrinnyDood 1 year ago Report
Nice work! A very fun belated Halloween romp indeed!
I kinda love the fact they live in a world with those deadly (if they grow big enough) Barnacles, and just have to deal with it.
That fairy really was a bit of a troublemaker, and she did technically get her revenge on Brad, though she didn't get much time to enjoy it, or stop Cyntia from becoming collateral damage. xD
Good stuff!
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Posted by Nalzindar 1 year ago Report
As always, your comments are put highly in regard and I'm happy to know that you found it fun. I knew that I wanted to come back to those barnacle women, but time prevented me from coming up with a juicy story about the barnacles themselves. Instead I figured out it perhaps could be fun making the almost victim into a temporally (and unwittingly) predator herself : )
By making Esmeralda forget the whole thing, I figured out I could squeeze in a funny comment at the end (or else I would have let her remember it)
The fairy was a troublemaker who had it coming a long way, revenge is a double edged sword that probably caused more damage than good in this case XD
At least I think Esmeralda won't be hungry for a while!
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Posted by optimus110 1 year ago Report
Very nice , please more cock vore comic and story , im tiny girl , i love live inside your balls giant man :)
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Posted by Nalzindar 1 year ago Report
Thanks, I shall try to find more opportunities for cock vore, I know you enjoy being gobbled up by a giant hungry member : )
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Posted by optimus110 1 year ago Report
Thanks giant man ;)
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