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On one dark and sinister night, a horde of ethereal invaders arrive to feast upon the souls of Tokyo's beautiful young women!
A commission from Daiguey that's mostly 'Classic Prinny' but has enough slight twists that it was very fun project to take on!
Let me know what you think!
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Posted by V 1 year ago Report
Great short story...interesting choice of predator
Posted by PrinnyDood 1 year ago Report
Thanks!
I can't take too much credit for the predator design, but it was definitely a fun project to work on!
Posted by Nalzindar 1 year ago Report
Absolutely wonderful, after reading the story, I can already tell that this is a tale I will come to read many more times.
What I especially enjoyed was the horror theme mood I got from it. The huge and voracious youkai feeding on helpless girls reminds me of several anime scenes. When reading this I had the anime style from Blood C in my head, but only with the good parts without all the gore and blood.
The youkai you describes are great, the spiser-like one, the lamprey headed one and the classical ogre were the best in my opinion :)
The flight to the train stadion was the most thrilling and of course the numerous noms and devouring of girls were superb :D
Funny enough, after reading this I have been imagine a follow- up where a group of giant female japanese goddesses are trying to save the situation/souls, but with quite a few mishaps and naughtiness from their side too. Sending some of these unfortunate victims through another round of you-know-what XD
Posted by PrinnyDood 1 year ago Report
Thank you! I'm always happy if a story I've done is worth a re-read!
It definitely turned out to be a fun project to work on, and you are correct, there was a certain anime aesthetic going through my head when I wrote this for sure. xD
Posted by Omny87 1 year ago Report
Are these yokai based on any particular legends? I only know a few but none of these sound familiar.
Posted by Daiguey1 1 year ago Report
They're mostly based on the Yokai in the game Ghostwire Tokyo
Posted by PrinnyDood 1 year ago Report
Yeah, as Daiguey said, they're (loosely) inspired by the creatures from the Ghostwire Tokyo game.
Posted by VividLucidity 1 year ago Report
A lovely story, especially the part with the gigantic ogre pred. And while I know it's the wrong part to focus on, I can't help but wonder about one part. The lack of power and fact it's only the young women makes me think the entire story takes place in a 'parallel world', even before they're consumed by the fog. So now I'm wondering what it looked like for those in the normal world, did all of the young women just abruptly disappear, wisked away to the other world, clothes and all?
...I'm focusing on all the wrong parts, aren't I?~
Posted by PrinnyDood 1 year ago Report
Glad you liked!
There's no 'wrong' part to focus on, as far as I'm concerned! But yeah, this commission was apparently largely inspired by the Ghostwire Tokyo game, which I'm not very familiar with, but I'm inclined toward your interpretation myself - it certainly explains the whole situation neatly.