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It's a rough world to be human, small, edible with predators by night that drives all sane humans inside. Humans survive by being relatively quiet, staying on the move or holding down in heavily walled cities where they can at least be safe by day.
We look upon a former mercenary, now guard in such a coastal town, looking for a new apprentice after losing yet another to the monsters who have found a way to lurk among them.
(an introduction to something new, more excitable moments should be in the works)
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Posted by magicboy13 1 year ago Report
Ohhhhh this looks very interesting. Returning to your roots, I see.
And... a boy named Daniel! A reference to your earlier work? Hehe, I guess this Daniel's going down a dragon's throat.
Posted by danmatt 1 year ago Report
I suspect most problems will be going down Daniel's throat in this story.
Posted by sharky 1 year ago Report
YES... I lOVE when you write of dragons. I hope you do tie in Daniel fro the other stories this new one. I would love to see more of him.
Posted by DrakeZephyr 1 year ago Report
^^; I'm bad at names, and honestly don't remember which story I last used the name Daniel in. I should probably make a list of character names...
Posted by magicboy13 1 year ago Report
The one with Cloud, if I recall correctly.
Posted by DrakeZephyr 1 year ago Report
Ah... I don't think I could manage to overlap those two worlds
Posted by magicboy13 1 year ago Report
That's why I thought... "oh, maybe in this series, Drake will want THIS Daniel eaten." XD
Posted by johaku99 1 year ago Report
Nice story i absolutely enjoyed it cant wait too see the next chapter
Posted by FaceInCrowd42 1 year ago Report
With Coleus, you had my curiosity. With THIS, you have my attention. This is properly written and with none of the pacing issues I see with 95% of the "actually trying to have a story" stories on this site. It's very rare indeed that I find something here that I simply enjoy reading.
Posted by DrakeZephyr 1 year ago Report
I hope you'll find the pacing to your liking, I've been trying a little harder with this series to pull out some more of the writing tricks
Posted by sharky 1 year ago Report
it is good to have your dragon writting skills back
Posted by sharky 1 year ago Report
Hey Drake, are you still willing to make this a series. I would like to see more of your fantastic writting
Posted by DrakeZephyr 1 year ago Report
It'll be a series, should be more of this story coming out tommorrow
Posted by sharky 1 year ago Report
oh my ! cant wait