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Monica's always been a bit of a wall flower, but she's going to try to get out of her shell at the college pool party for her girlfriend's sake. But why the hell is that girl in the pool 60 feet tall?!
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Posted by Sizetyme 1 year ago Report
Excellent stuff as always! I so enjoy the way you describe internals. I like how you give insight to how the experience feels for both the pred and prey.
Posted by Ohgra 1 year ago Report
thank you! i like to try to give both perspectives especially on stuff with misunderstandings and shit like that, i feel like it adds to the impact!
Posted by AnAccount 1 year ago Report
Nice! It's silly yet awesome just how casual this one was
Posted by Ohgra 1 year ago Report
thanks! I find these short little vignettes are the most satisfying to write tbh, fun way to shake out an idea
Posted by doomed 1 year ago Report
Oof her fears were realized XD
Posted by Ohgra 1 year ago Report
the moment she actually wanted to be seen no one noticed her plight
Posted by Zerg 1 year ago Report
Hope we can see some more same size stuff from you <3
Posted by Ohgra 1 year ago Report
it has been a string of gts stuff, hasn't it? good news though im literally writing a same size piece right now!
Posted by Zerg 1 year ago Report
Yay!
Posted by r0nniel0ng 1 year ago Report
I really enjoyed it, but of course, I'd love it to go on another chapter or two :P
Posted by Ohgra 1 year ago Report
planning on some sequels! glad you enjoyed <3