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Before I get any farther I want to say that this story contains NO incestuous vore. Not that I'm particularly against that... I just wrote the story with the idea of not having any in it. Other than that... I stuck a mess of tags on here, so hopefully they sum it all up.
I... wanted to do a more complex title, but with everything going on in this story I couldn't really think of one that fit...
My longest story yet! My old record was, uhhh.... a bit over 11k words for a CYA piece, or about 9k for some of my comms... this one comes in at just under twenty thousand words. Originally inspired another, much shorter story on the site where three daughters served themselves to their dad for father's day; a story where, instead, three daughters invite three people over for Father's Day, one per meal... with a few twists and turns along the way~
Funny enough, I started writing this story the very day I applied for my gallery here! I wrote, like, more than a third of it in a day as passenger on a roadtrip... then I hit actually introducing the dad and crashed for quite a while. Turns out I'm not great at writing "dad" preds, so he might be a little... flat, in comparison to the other characters. THAT SAID, I had a ~ton~ of fun with the other characters, so I hope you enjoy reading them as much as I did writing them.
Thanks for reading! Let me know what character's storyline you enjoyed the most, what you thought in general... I'm happy to hear it all~
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Posted by Bod67 1 year ago Report
Would love to see more of these three
Posted by PaperWriter 1 year ago Report
I'm tempted to write more of them, at some point! It was a lot of fun developing them all :)
Posted by Randomdude5 1 year ago Report
This is an enjoyable and well written story. Thank you for writing it, and posting. Amelie was such a fun prey character, and I liked reading about her getting eaten. My favorite part of the story was probably Abby eating and digesting her first meal Christy.
Posted by PaperWriter 1 year ago Report
glad you liked it, and thank you for the review while I was editing!
First time preds are such a treat~
Posted by Randomdude5 1 year ago Report
I got lazy and decided not to write a long review, since I had already written some when trying to review it, before you posted it. Since I was negative then, I tried to be positive with the comment here.
Posted by PaperWriter 1 year ago Report
I mean, I was honestly surprised to get any comment from you, given the reviews I already got, so I'm not about to call that lazy.
I can't really call those negative reviews, I asked for help finding problems with the story and you gave it...