Andris - 3 years ago

Have you seen the movie Hook? I don't know if anyone got any of the movie references I tossed into the beginning.

Hawkeye7 - 3 years ago

Welcome back! - Great story (as always) - especially liked the first part with Rebecca, her helpless situation, considering her predicament inside that soft slippery pulsing blackness. Hmmmm :)

Andris - 3 years ago

Your praise fuels my pen. =) Thank you.

Vstar66 - 3 years ago

Damn i didn't know it had been that long.it was well worth the wait

Andris - 4 years ago

Thank you! Glad you liked it!

Ragnow - 4 years ago

Awesome. I also just saw the beginning of Mary and Troy Chapter 10, that was also great!

Andris - 4 years ago

Look at 4 and 6.

Ragnow - 4 years ago

Do you have any other stories with unwilling or cruel AV like this? The tag shows none of your stories do ;(

Rimedane - 4 years ago

Welcome back to the land of the living, glad to have you back. Now, as for the entry itself, great job. I look forward to any of your future stories. I noticed as well you've begun to demonstrate a bit of a dominant streak regarding acting as a giantess. It's great that you're really connecting with him, it's not often people are so acceptive as you've been with him.

Andris - 4 years ago

I appreciate positive comments and constructive criticism.

Hawkeye7 - 4 years ago

Great followup story - loving this series and the characters! :)

Andris - 4 years ago

Hmm. In addition to Mary and Troy? I'm trying to think of a premis. Ideas?

brent5333 - 4 years ago

I love your writing style and details. I unfortunately am a poor reviewer.

Out of curiousity will you be making another romance pov story like Mary and Troy. I think you are awesome.

Andris - 4 years ago

When I write these stories hoping for some sort of positive feedback, I rarely get it. So your post here feeds my writer soul, and I thank you from the bottom of my heart. There will be more to come.

ohlordbob - 4 years ago

Okay, I have no idea how I even found this story, duckduckgo normally never brings up Eka's Portal even when you search for the damn thing and yet when looking for ass play giantess content today, somehow the tag for Taborlin's POV of this story popped up, which lead me here.
Most 'Size Content' stories I read are very....let's say I'm happy when the writers know that if a different character is speaking, there is suppose to be a new paragraph.
Since my bar with fetish writing is so low, I very rarely am impressed with the writing of a story, the fetish content? suuure sometimes, the actual writing style and progression being enjoyable? Wtf hardly ever.
That being said, I literally logged back onto my Eka's account today, the one with 3000 messages because I never logged on, just to say: JESUS CHRIST MY DUDE THAT WAS REALLY WELL WRITTEN.
I will for sure be following you and reading into your past work of the same concept. This is the first time I've actually read a size story and had to stop and remind myself this was fiction, it was that well written and I BARELY EVER SAY THAT TO NORMAL NONE LEWD STORIES. I absolutely loved how you wrote the Giantess, she was realistic, classy with enough of a playful dom side that she was awesome to follow through her first person POV, another thing I rarely like. Even more so in size content because often the Preds are unrealistically cruel or sexual.
From one writer to another, I hope you write plenty more of whatever you wish, and find great success in it as well!
Now to disappear back into the void and forget I even have an account on here sometimes.
...And also to listen to Keyreel Raskolenko because now it's stuck in my head god damn it.

Hawkeye7 - 4 years ago

Fantastic continuation of this series. Great work as always Andris.

Andris - 4 years ago

No problem at all, I appreciate having readers with questions. Mary's wish made Troy's fantasy real, and part of that was invulnerability to harm by a giantess at tiny size. The Lady is the only exception, for reasons that will become clearer later but ultimately involve her greater mastery of magic. Troy's immunity will pay a role in the story later. And thank you, I'm glad you like my work.

Bautunnick - 4 years ago

Yeah... Sorry for that. I really wish there was an "Edit" button.

Also, I kinda forgot to ask something. This is about previous chapters, so I'm not spoiling anything, I hope. In the very beginning Mary was kinda willing to have Troy suffocated. And she didn't have any idea she needed to consciously keep her tiny alive. That, and a borderline drawn between "Troy" and "other tinies" surviving the treatment made me think that Troy became not only telepathic, but also virtually indestructible either while tiny or at any size. But during the "training" Troy actually started to suffocate before the Lady provided him with her energy. So, how exactly does this work, if you don't mind answering? Or perhaps some explanation will be disclosed in the later chapters?
P.S. Sorry for being so prying. Your writing style seems easy and interesting to read to me and I became captivated by the story.

Andris - 4 years ago

=) Shhhh, don't spoil things! But I'm glad you enjoy the story. I'll work on the next chapter, I'm pretty well into it already.

Bautunnick - 4 years ago

One Mary to rule them all, One Mary to find them,
One Mary to bring them all and in the colon bind them.

Really hoping for the continuation. This story is very enjoyable to read.
It would be interesting if Claudia was gradually "corrupted" by the kinky will of Mary while wearing the ring=)
I can't help but root for Claudia a little bit though (even though she is unlikely to have any chance to win). Recruiting new members for the villain rights protection association here=)

Andris - 4 years ago

A coffee shop in western Liverpool.

Kurczak48 - 5 years ago

All hail to the massage chair! It was really fun to read, with a lot of comedy bits.
It's amazing in both bad and good way how these scenarios feel probable. ^^

Hawkeye7 - 5 years ago

I mean they started really 'wanting it' - but then the reality of their situation probably changed their mind! :)

Andris - 5 years ago

What do you mean desires turning?

Hawkeye7 - 5 years ago

Great story as always. Love the casual style of this character and her exploits. Hope to see more of her other victims desires turning.

threk - 5 years ago

Lol, the concept of financial domination is even stranger to me than the anal vore. Fun story :)

Hawkeye7 - 5 years ago

Nice one Andris - she totally ruled him - although i suspect he enjoyed it really :)

Andris - 5 years ago

Thanks Hawkeye. =)
Yeah she is.

Hawkeye7 - 5 years ago

Very hot story ... loved the descriptions of the internal experiences. Jessie is one mean cookie :)

Andris - 1 year ago

Out of how many?

anonymousCY - 1 year ago

great work for four points

Hawkeye7 - 5 years ago

Wow, another amazing story - i just love the casual style and perspective from the female lead. Great stuff as always!

Andris - 5 years ago

I love comments and constructive criticism. If you like my work please tell me so.

C107galaxytachyon - 5 years ago

Wow. You’re quite the generous fellow, Y’know.

Andris - 5 years ago

You know what...I think I'll do one better. I draw up character sketches for these ladies. I think I'll post my notes. Perhaps that will help give you an idea.

C107galaxytachyon - 5 years ago

No: not at all.

But a subtle hint would be nice, at least.

Andris - 5 years ago

You want me to *tell* you?

C107galaxytachyon - 5 years ago

I musk ask, though: exactly how do you plan to have their confrontation play out, when it comes time for that?

Andris - 5 years ago

You'll find out...

Hawkeye7 - 5 years ago

Great continuation of the story, thanks for returning to this world. So much happening in the practice with these 6 vixens! I wonder if they will all continue to get along, as the battle commences or if any will turn on each other and go over to 'the dark side' :)

Hawkeye7 - 5 years ago

Wow your really on a roll! Excellent story, loving the casual style. Interesting ending, as you manage to make us sympathize 'a little' for Raul, given everything he went through. Although that wouldn't be seen as too harsh a punishment for some of us ;)

Kurczak48 - 5 years ago

Compared to the first two, this one features much milder action and emotions ^^
...that is, before the added part!

Andris - 5 years ago

Polite?

Kurczak48 - 5 years ago

And I was bamboozled what happened when it got deleted.
You sure added a ton of casual talk in this one, adds some dynamic and makes the feeling as if she was recording VLog. ^^
Though without new part, it was really polite story, haha

dcvfgb1234 - 5 years ago

Another really great story. Really liked it. Especially how he ended up further into the colon than in the previous story.

Kurczak48 - 5 years ago

You do have pretty good experience how it works. o-O
That, or your intuition hits right on the spot!
What I mean, it's obviously not exactly the same thing, but I can relate to this in a way that during this 'state' girlfriend tends to go a little crazy with those things.
Especially when she knows your kinks~

Andris - 5 years ago

Thank you! I'm planning my next entry.

GeneralUrist - 5 years ago

Heh, this is a fun story, I hope you continue it. I'm curious how this adventurous relationship will develop.

threk - 5 years ago

Lol, not 100% sure why that comment was duplicated.
Too much mashing the "submit" button, presumably :P

Kurczak48 - 5 years ago

Got to confess, I often skip quite big, less entertaining part of story, but this one caught my attention from the beginning to the end!
It felt like a real-life dream scenario. No overextended parts, details just enough to keep imagination going, no overfantasized stuff like oversized body parts or hypersexualized experience..
Though I'm more into anal vore being one-way-trip, but you described it in a way that makes it very easy to impersonate as something that could actually happen!

dcvfgb1234 - 5 years ago

I really loved the story. The casualness of the pred and things like the explanation of how it'd be inside her rectum.

Andris - 5 years ago

Thank you! You honor me...five times. =)

Normally people don't post many comments to my writing, so I really appreciate the feedback.

threk - 5 years ago

Haha, very entertaining take on a more realistic relationship involving AV.
Irl, sex and fetishes can just be amusing sometimes in a healthy relationship, so this was a very fun read.

Ragnow - 4 years ago

Awesome, looking forward to that :)

Andris - 4 years ago

There's already plenty of that in the next chapter. It'll be done soon.

Ragnow - 4 years ago

The non-humorous, cruelty of Claudia doesnt seem much your regular style, but damn did it scratch an itch for me.
What are the chances we see another story of her successful slaying again?

C107galaxytachyon - 5 years ago

I think you forgot to detail what Amanda’s life force felt to Troy near the end.

Andris - 6 years ago

https://ae01.alicdn.com/kf/HTB1A.XPJVXXXXXgaXXXxh4dFXXXl/100-Medical-silicon-vibrator-kegel-balls-vibrator-sex-toys-bolas-vaginal-ball-tighten-aid-love-geisha.jpeg

Best to-scale image available.

C107galaxytachyon - 6 years ago

You have another visual reference of it 'not' being used in that manner, preferably next to something similar in scale?

Andris - 6 years ago

https://ae01.alicdn.com/kf/HTB1Nj8rIXXXXXc9XXXXq6xXFXXXZ/Smart-Duotone-Ben-Wa-Ball-On-String-Weighted-Female-Kegel-Vaginal-Tight-Exercise-Safe-Material-Soft.jpg

Something like this, except the two ends can be screwed open.

C107galaxytachyon - 6 years ago

You have any visual reference for the barbells mentioned in the last few paragraphs?

kazki4 - 6 years ago

Im on the edge of my seat this is incredibly well done!

Andris - 6 years ago

I love comments!

Andris - 6 years ago

Oh shoot your right

C107galaxytachyon - 6 years ago

You forgot to include this entry in your gallery.

kazki4 - 6 years ago

Oh my gosh i am so enthralled! Seriously you write twists and thrills that Ian Flemming would be jealous of!

Scarecrow1 - 6 years ago

That seems like a fundimental difference, i feel ny comment questioning this was not loved

Andris - 6 years ago

I love appreciative comments and constructive criticism. If my work isn't to someone's personal taste, then oh well. We all like different stuff, so no point wasting time telling me so. But constructive criticism? I welcome that. I need it to become a better writer.

kazki4 - 6 years ago

Thank you! Your talent is fantastic!

Andris - 6 years ago

Your praise fuels my pen. =)
Thabk you.

kazki4 - 6 years ago

Niiiiiice! That twist was masterful!

kazki4 - 6 years ago

Your writing is amazing as always! Awesome blend of kink and drama and budding romance!

Andris - 3 years ago

=) thank you

Voremugen - 3 years ago

Love it so far.

Andris - 6 years ago

Thank you!

RestorationStation - 6 years ago

I really like the pacing of the story so far, cant wait for more!

Andris - 2 years ago

And now we're at 7000. Wow. I'm very honored.

Voremugen - 3 years ago

Wonderful read. Really liked it. Thank you for writing. I envy Troy right noe, wish to be in his position xD

Andris - 3 years ago

The 5000 view mark is officially crossed.. Another chapter it is.

Andris - 5 years ago

What do you mean floating starts? If you mean * asterisks, they represent telepathic speech. Quotations represent speaking out loud. It's how I keep track.

I will take your advice on the spacing.

Dooot - 5 years ago

The story itself is great,but the fornant makes it hard to read. There should be more spaces between paragrapsh and actual quotation marks instead of these floating starts and it would be perfect.

Zolatul - 6 years ago

Enjoyable to a point, but personally the extreme bullying/dominatrix bit sorta took me out of it. I quite like your style though, and while this wasn't exactly my cup of tea I can tell it's pretty well-written and you put a good bit of work into it. Please do continue writing, I feel you can go very far with your work, and don't get too discouraged if people disagree with certain themes you enjoy. Just felt I needed to comment after reading through this, and I hope you have a good day/night, Andris.

Andris - 4 years ago

Now that I look at it at this size, you're right.

Garrysrevenge - 4 years ago

The thumbnail confused me at first. I thought a bunch of littls spiders were crawling all over a girls legs