Volunteer - 1 month ago

yeeeeap~ I hope it wasnt too cruel >>

doomed - 1 month ago

Oof death by drowning in cum and acids

TheTinyWriter - 1 month ago

You’re welcome! I’m glad I was able to give decent feedback!

Volunteer - 1 month ago

Im glad you liked it! seriously thank you for commenting on all the pages and leaving your thoughts! it means a lot to me :)

TheTinyWriter - 1 month ago

Really great final page to finish it all off. All in all, a fun comic!

Volunteer - 1 month ago

yep, poor gal- im glad her sacrifice wasn't in vain xD

Yeah, those internals were really fun to draw- I do love giving details but sometimes as you said, it can be fun for the reader themselves to imagine it...

though the real reason is that drawing internals is hard and time consuming lol

TheTinyWriter - 1 month ago

Poor purple haired friend drowning like that…but it makes for good content.

I like how you added the extra detail of how full the stomach was getting while leaving it to the imagination. I feel like that’s poignant use of letting a person use their imagination to fill in the blanks.

Volunteer - 1 month ago

agreeeeeed~ Ive been wanting to draw something like this for a while >> im glad you've liked it so far!

Volunteer - 1 month ago

I'm glad you're liking where its going, one more page to go!

ProbablyNine - 1 month ago

This sequence is so hot <3

Volunteer - 1 month ago

Thank you! im happy you're liking how it turned out!

CultofDegenerates - 1 month ago

Once again, loving it! - Hallow

Volunteer - 1 month ago

hahahaha we'll have to see, but yeah... im sure she'll be so so thrilled xD

TheTinyWriter - 1 month ago

I’m sure the purple haired former friend will be fine added this.
Totally.
Definitely

Volunteer - 1 month ago

agreed! it was really fun to draw her, thank you for the compliment!

neferpitou - 1 month ago

It's so cute the way she lick her lips!

Volunteer - 1 month ago

Me too! I'm glad you like it so far! And I hope you like what comes next :D

Volunteer - 1 month ago

haha yeah, shes very happy with herself ;P

neferpitou - 1 month ago

i love her smile!

TheTinyWriter - 1 month ago

I’m eager to see more!

CultofDegenerates - 1 month ago

Without a Doubt, one of my favorite type of stories, I await with baited breathe to see what you make!!! - Hallow????

TheTinyWriter - 3 months ago

You’re welcome!

Volunteer - 3 months ago

oooh right, duh xD. im glad you like it, and yeah! i might go n do that soon, thank you for the encouragement!

TheTinyWriter - 3 months ago

Oh no, I meant the previous ones XD Though I would love to see this colored as well and see the extra shots you have planned.

It looks great, I assure you. No need to worry.

Volunteer - 3 months ago

Im guessing you mean color it? like color this gif lol? yeah! honestly i might go back and do that soon xD- and maybe add a swallowing/stomach shot too~!

seriously though, im glad you liked it! I was kinda worried about the mouthshot one as I feel it isnt as good as the other ones, but im seriously glad you liked it <3

TheTinyWriter - 3 months ago

Even if you couldn’t animate it, I really did enjoy this. Loved the colors and how you drew the inside of the mouth. It really captures the flashiness of it

Volunteer - 3 months ago

thank you, im glad you enjoyed it!

Scalliar - 3 months ago

That's magnificesnt!

Volunteer - 3 months ago

Thank you! im glad you liked it! honestly i was kinda worried that the second part would be the least liked, so im glad you liked it!

ProbablyNine - 3 months ago

Big fan of this sequence. Especially the second part <3

alockwood1 - 3 months ago

Yep.

Volunteer - 3 months ago

definitely~

alockwood1 - 3 months ago

Upcoming trouble.

Volunteer - 3 months ago

Okay! done!

TheTinyWriter - 3 months ago

You’re welcome! The visuals especially help to bring it out!

randomguy9 - 3 months ago

I think just the story text for now. :)

Scalliar - 3 months ago

By the way, another thought... It might be really hot to show how the predator, after digesting the victim in her stomach, during the next day, before she needs to "let the victim out", thinks from time to time about what she did, and, for example, she strokes her tummy in the area of ​​the small intestine or large intestine, and maybe gets turned on by her thoughts. As for scat content... Well, that's up to you)

Volunteer - 3 months ago

ooh good idea, I'll keep that in mind! thank you for the suggestion!

And you don't have to call me sir, im not your boss XD

Volunteer - 3 months ago

BTW! If anybody wants a no text version, I can easily get that too, just respond to this comment with a "1" so i know lol

TheTinyWriter - 9 months ago

I definitely will after seeing this!

Volunteer - 9 months ago

ooh yes! the artist who made it is really talented! I really really appreciate what they did for me, she looks like, IDENTICAL to what I imagine she'd look like irl, its amazing! I'd definitely check them out if you can :)

TheTinyWriter - 9 months ago

I never actually said much (and then forgot to return to it lol) but this comic was actually what got me to read the story that accompanied it. Its a really well done comic! The person who made this is quite skilled.

Volunteer - 9 months ago

Thank you! yeah thats actually exactly what i was going for! im really glad it had the effect i wanted :)

TheTinyWriter - 9 months ago

I absolutely love the detail you put into both the saliva and the mouth itself. It makes the mouth look like it’s glistening, or at least pop out to make everything else more noticeable—like that’s what the prey is focusing on.

Volunteer - 1 year ago

Thanks sm! Im looking forward to the future of Abi as well! I actually do have how Abigail and Angel met, maybe one day I'll draw it out, thanks for the comment!

Volunteer - 1 year ago

Aaaah of course! really it was a blast, I was planning to do an internal mawshot for a bit and You and Abi fit PERFECTLY for this!

I think that Abi's prey is just sad they won't contribute *more* to Abigail's body, obviously. Unfortunately, this lil' human only has so many calories they can provide, I guess they wanted to end up more than just an extra thin layer of pudge. I guess Abigail will have to eat even more humans to make a difference~

johnnyboy246 - 1 year ago

Love how this turned out, amazing work as always. Can't wait to see how Abi and her GFS relationship grow and to learn more about them as well as how angel and abi met

Volunteer - 1 year ago

Its my first time! I don't even know where i got the idea from haha, but im glad you liked another Amanda piece, She hasn't seen some love for a while xD

AngelDissonance - 1 year ago

It looks lovely to me! I had no idea you also did animation in addition to all the other lovely art you post! o:

...and hey, you can never go wrong with more Amanda, right~? <3

zacriac - 1 year ago

Such a cute details!

Volunteer - 1 year ago

I'm sure she'd love that <3

Lonelyone69 - 1 year ago

can I be her next meal i won't put up a fight

Volunteer - 1 year ago

Thank you! I wasnt sure if anybody would notice this detail... but brooke's face gets more red the closer you get to her mouth~

zacriac - 1 year ago

I love her lil blush! Shes so cute!

Volunteer - 1 year ago

Thank you! It's one of the first time's I think i've pulled it off well. I'm glad your liking Abigails shenanigans cuz she's become one of my favs too! <3

AngelDissonance - 1 year ago

Lovely work on the internal!

Abigail is such a fun character, very quickly becoming one of my favourites <3

Volunteer - 1 year ago

Are you prehaps referring to yourself :P, It would take a looot of convincing for a human to move from meal to mate for Abigail, buuuut... you can always rely on the fact that at the very least, I'm sure abigail would ~love to eat whoever this mystery person is, no matter the personality, all humans taste ~extraordinary~ to her :)
I'm glad you like her, It will probably be just short snippets with art, like this one here, for now. I feel if I did a longform story of her, It wouldn't be... suuuuper original. but seriously, thank you so much for your interest!!!

johnnyboy246 - 1 year ago

Well if Abigail's cool with genderfluid bisexuals, then I know the perfect person she could date(or eat, depending on how it goes :3).
Nah but really I'm excited to see what you do with the character going forward, since I already love the concept

Volunteer - 1 year ago

I'm glad you like her a lot! And to be honest... I don't know. I think it would be cool if she did have a little girlfriend/wifey, but I'm not setting anything in stone just yet. Her human gf would either not know, and Abigail would hide her urges from her, not wanting to scare her human gf away... or be on board, even attracted to Abigails human eating tendencies, but I'm not sure which route to go on...
Once again, thank you for asking this interesting question!

(I did actually do an RP with someone... but they just ended up as a ~very~ satisfying snack for Abigail... so nothing so far!)

Volunteer - 3 months ago

yeah! its fun to imagine, i just know in the back of my mind im probably off by a whole lot xD

TheTinyWriter - 3 months ago

Sad indeed lol.
But the calculations at least seem fun enough if you’re really passionate about it.

Volunteer - 3 months ago

BUT! the most she has ever eaten in one day is 27! (7 in the morning, 6 for lunch, and 14 for dinner if you're curious~) making up 144,000kcal each, and 3,888,000 calories total. So by the next morning when her body had absorbed all those humans she had eaten the day before, she was probably made up of 5-10% humans, with 95% of their bodies being burned off for energy or converted to waste

Volunteer - 3 months ago

well... good question, honestly, its kinda hard to tell xD, I suppose the best way is to see how many calories they have produced and then how many calories her body has burned in total! so~

she ate her first human when she was 20 years old, and she is 23 now, so that is 3 years of eating humans~
365 days x 3 years = 1095 days.

Humans have in total calorically made up 11.47 days of food for her... sooo~ 11.47 days of calories/1095 days = ~1.1% of her total body is made up of humans :P

SPHikeV2 - 3 months ago

It's fine xd

Volunteer - 4 months ago

Maybe it will happen in the future! I haven't drawn much spicier stuff but this one i always love to go back on and read, so maybe ill continue it someday!
thanks for the comment!

randomguy9 - 5 months ago

Ooh, this is extremely hot. I'd love to see something like this showing how her stomach churns and kneads her prey

Volunteer - 1 year ago

Im sure neither would Ms. Monica~

Lonelyone69 - 1 year ago

i would not mind being in Mateo's spot ????????

zacriac - 1 year ago

She looks like she did! :p

Volunteer - 1 year ago

Thank you! I'm glad you enjoyed it, I know Monica sure did XD

zacriac - 1 year ago

It’s so good! The perfect threesome lol :p

TheTinyWriter - 9 months ago

No worries! And you’re welcome. I think it also makes sense because those are the more intense feelings you wanted to concentrate on. Dividing it would definitely not give the same impact.

And absolutely yeah. Bring too empathetic I think would’ve killed a lot of the mood.

Volunteer - 9 months ago

First off, sorry for the late response! Secondly, Thank you! I'm glad you liked it, it is quite a hefty story, I focused on Monica's perspective because well... a lot of times i find myself feeling bad for the tinies if they are the main focus lol

thats why i mostly made Mateo angry, rather than sad, depressed, or scared when i DID show his side. Monica's experience as a pred is more what I am looking for in cruel pred scenarios.

TheTinyWriter - 9 months ago

Usually I don’t really read stories like this one but I thought it was pretty good. I liked the focus on Ms. Monica’s experiences primarily and how they made her feel, while still keeping enough of the prey’s point of view to make it more vivid and to capture what exactly Ms. Monica wants.

Volunteer - 1 year ago

Thank you! Im glad you liked it! It was a blast to write, it is basically a compilation of everything I personally love in vore stories, so it was really a joy to write it as well. Thanks!

AnAccount - 1 year ago

I mean the story has almost everything you could want. Loved it!

Volunteer - 1 year ago

Oh yeah, its gonna be pretty long, I'm estimating 25k words, but Its still in the works so I'm not certain, I hope you enjoy it though when it comes out!

doomed - 1 year ago

Sheesh if this is the short version the king version must be a kids chapter book LMAO

Volunteer - 1 year ago

oooh okay, I use google docs so that seems pretty easy, I was kinda worried I'd have to go use another program and reformat everything I wrote or something XD, thank you sm, I'll be sure to use that In the extended version

Grec0R0man - 1 year ago

OMG, thank you for the love! Glad you liked "The Teacher is a Tiny Traitor"!

RTF stands for "Rich Text Format", its a different file type that I and others have found that is far better for viewing purposes. If you are using Word of Libre Office, you can save the file/story as that instead of the usual word document type. Or, if you use Google Docs, just scroll down to Download, and choose file type, and click RTF.

I hope that helps, again, I love the story, and I cannot wait to see more from you!

Volunteer - 1 year ago

THANK YOU! oh my god you are literally like an idol to me I love your vore stories literally so much its insane. I'm not even exagerrating when I say that you are one of the main reasons I uploaded this story in the first place, your "the teacher is a tiny traitor" is one of my all time faves. I'm guessing you can see that this story was at least partially inspired by your own. also yes I glad you like the pred because I absolutely adore her cruel antics as well.
one thing though... what is RTF? I do get what you mean when I look at my stories after I post them where it just doesn't look very good, and I'd like to change that, so if you could help me that would be great. no pressure tho, I don't want you to have to waste your time! cheers and i'm glad you enjoyed my story, seriously!

Grec0R0man - 1 year ago

OOO! I like this! I love the detail, and I SOOO like the pred! Recommendation, though, if I may be so bold, but I would heartily recommend, after trial and error on my part, using the RTF format to post text documents, it is way better than using word/office document files. Makes things a bit legible for both mobile and non-mobile users alike. Really, I really enjoyed this story, and cannot wait to see more from you ;)

Volunteer - 1 year ago

oh okay, good night then! yeah, it even surprised me I was thinking the entire story would be like 10k words, but here we are (and this is the 'short' version!) still, I would say only like, 5% setup, and then the rest of it is vore all the way through, so i really hope you enjoy it!