Uploaded: 4 years ago
Owner: rubberducky942
Tags: F/F
sorry my piece of shit computer can only handle docx, pdf and rtf files and rtf/pdf files cause a fatal error while uploading so I have to use docx that wont show up on this site =( please just click the download under the empty white box, i think my storytelling was bad here but atleast I used a spell checker this time
Vstar66 - 4 years ago
Just download it
Duskthewolfcub - 4 years ago
uhhhh there's nothing here
Uploaded: 4 years ago
Owner: rubberducky942
Tags: Belly Pregnancy Digestion F/F Weight Gain Same Size Domination Fatal F/FF f/multiple Multiple Preys twin prey babysitter pred Underage prey
i have no idea how to get this working but i think you can download the story? let me know if it works or if you want part 2
Stardust1dragon - 1 year ago
Same
DnD6 - 3 years ago
Its not downloading. The file is unavailable
TW - 4 years ago
Not bad, lots of spelling/grammar issues. I would highly suggest running this through a free site like Grammarly to pick out the blatent ones. Also, paragraphs are your friend and help you avoid run on sentences.
Not a bad job for your attempt, I would like to see more.
WillingWombPrey - 4 years ago
I'd definitely like a sequal.
rubberducky942 - 4 years ago
what part needs editing I can do that easy enough, I know lots of gramma and spelling mistakes and few scenes were just like huh, whats the story line anymore. thanks for the input =)
rugli - 3 years ago
part 3?