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Deleting Contacts:Melancholy By FutureBellyAche -- Report

Uploaded: 11 months ago

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An experienced predator starts removing contacts from her phone, strong emotions well up in her as she deletes them all.
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A story written for a writing group! Was a fun scenario to write. Writing group is in a friend's server. Come join us:https://discord.gg/cApyNFcz2J

I ended up deciding to make two versions. They both start similarly, but one begins changing towards the middle. To a different ending.
They don't really regret eating anybody here:https://aryion.com/g4/view/1011002

Also I completely lost where I found this image, and reverse image search wasn't helpful. So sorry :(

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TrainerKatrine

Posted by TrainerKatrine 11 months ago Report

Two story uploads in one day.. looking forward to reading this! x3

FutureBellyAche

Posted by FutureBellyAche 11 months ago Report

pfftt. Theyre both shorties and quite similar. but i hope you enjoy still!
It just made sense to seperate them like this. not really the alternate endings ive done before c:

RavenRoberts

Posted by RavenRoberts 11 months ago Report

Obvs you already know my thoughts but

Yah - I really really adore this story. Whole concept is wonderful and you did a great job with it ^///^

FutureBellyAche

Posted by FutureBellyAche 11 months ago Report

❤️❤️❤️
Thanks. I definitely had some you vibes in my mind when writing c:

RavenRoberts

Posted by RavenRoberts 11 months ago Report

:')

Blackheartedreaper2

Posted by Blackheartedreaper2 11 months ago Report

Yeah she's gonna keep doing it

FutureBellyAche

Posted by FutureBellyAche 11 months ago Report

MAAAAYBEEEEEEE

Belloc

Posted by Belloc 11 months ago Report

This is a really fun set up and you do a great job making each entry fun and distinct!

FutureBellyAche

Posted by FutureBellyAche 11 months ago Report

It was delightful exploring lots of micro scenarios.

PaperWriter

Posted by PaperWriter 11 months ago Report

Think this one is my preferred of the two. Enjoyed the more emotional feel, the pred realizing that she's eaten everyone she had or could have connected with, only to fall right back into that cycle... it's a neat setting :)

Shikari

Posted by Shikari 11 months ago Report

Poor thing ate any true friends and family she may have had. The cons of being a glutton!