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A Scared Nerd By Hetzering -- Report

Hey! I'm back with the Nerd story!

"How does it feel to become what you've always feared?"

I hope you will like this story and don't hesitate to give your opinion in comments or in PM to tell me what you liked or hated !


Warning: English is not my first language (although I'm getting by) so I wrote my story in my native language before I had it translated by Deepl, corrected with my knowledge and and having it proofread by the friendly https://aryion.com/g4/user/EloquentOrc

This story links several other characters from other stories I've done. However, you don't have to have read the other stories to enjoy this one. If you'd like to read about the adventures of other characters appearing in this story, here's the list:

Amber: Becoming the Top of The School

Lila: A Farmer's Need

Iris: A sadistic Little Angel (pay close attention to the tags if you don't like blood)

Rina: Trick 'r Treat/Becoming the Top of the School

Lily: Awakening of a Pred/Regrets of a Pred

Jade : A Sunny Pool Day/Awakening of a Pred/ A Fearless Pred ?

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Voredred

Posted by Voredred 9 months ago Report

Delicious. Very descriptive, and I thought Amelia's story was great, from beginning to end.

Hetzering

Posted by Hetzering 9 months ago Report

Thank! I'm glad you enjoyed our little Amelia and her evolution!

doomed

Posted by doomed 9 months ago Report

Oooh I love how you’ve pointed out the links to other stories

Hetzering

Posted by Hetzering 9 months ago Report

There are starting to be a lot of characters, so I thought it would be a good idea to point readers in the right direction if they wanted to read (or reread) more about them!

voredrawing

Posted by voredrawing 9 months ago Report

Great read and always exciting to see you post!

Hetzering

Posted by Hetzering 9 months ago Report

Thank you! I hope you'll be just as excited for what's next!

PaperWriter

Posted by PaperWriter 9 months ago Report

I enjoyed this a lot! ^^ The story was fun to follow, through the somewhat traumatic experiences of her first two prey to the gentleness of the third... I was a little bummed that there was a bit less detailed in digestion than some of your other works, but given that there were three separate prey for Amelia to to eat and digest over the course of the story, that probably would've added a lot of writing. Plus, the story was more about Amelia's journey as a pred than her prey's journey's through her, so I guess it makes sense to focus more on her perspective.

Hetzering

Posted by Hetzering 9 months ago Report

Yes, I didn't want to add a digestion part to this story because I preferred to focus on Amelia and her sensations, her discoveries. But normally, the next story, which won't be so long, will include a description of digestion!

PaperWriter

Posted by PaperWriter 9 months ago Report

I'll look forward to it then! I hope you have fun writing!

LastMK

Posted by LastMK 1 month ago Report

I think this is my new favorite.