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The odd girl at the park 04 By Debolte -- Report

Girl's gotta eat...
All in a day's-- in a few minutes' work.

All alts and variants I messed with: https://sta.sh/21gg30npynl5
(No scat, only mild gore, same as next page here on Eka's)
The individual panels are fun if you want to see the sequence more smoothly, they're all fit and aligned to sift through nicely =)

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Xenophage17

Posted by Xenophage17 3 months ago Report

Fantastic belly work

Debolte

Posted by Debolte 3 months ago Report

Thanks. Not a fan of the preds pose here, looks a bit awkward at times. But yeah super happy with the belleh!

Ohh I think I just figured it out... The neck leans forward to look down at belly and on poses where she looks straight ahead it looks wrong. Panels 1, 3 and 6 esp look off.

I was going for simple, quickly drawn chibi when I started all this, started with this page actually, but apparently I really can't do simple and quick, ended up with this weird mix. I think I got the hang of it in pages 9 & 10 tho.
Sry had to let that thought out lol.

Xenophage17

Posted by Xenophage17 3 months ago Report

No worries appreciate the commentary. Always interesting to learn what an artist was thinking. Personally have zero art talent so hard to critique, but on the plus side means everything looks good to me. Also huge fan of the little fart wisp and expression in the last panel.

Debolte

Posted by Debolte 3 months ago Report

Good to hear. Yeah I guess this page has always bothered me and I wanted to make it known lol. And nice about the wisp. I do love me some narrative visual flourish thingies.

Xenophage17

Posted by Xenophage17 3 months ago Report

Absolutely, although I have a weakness to farts and disposal teasing in general so I am pretty biased.

Wanderingspirit1333

Posted by Wanderingspirit1333 3 months ago Report

Excellent

doomed

Posted by doomed 3 months ago Report

Oh shit you posted !!!!

Debolte

Posted by Debolte 3 months ago Report

Supplies

Indighost

Posted by Indighost 3 months ago Report

love that last expression!

Debolte

Posted by Debolte 3 months ago Report

Oven went ding! cake ready

Kelly

Posted by Kelly 3 months ago Report

So cute

Mortaven

Posted by Mortaven 3 months ago Report

-w- Dat foreign, non-stick food goes right through her...!