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S.R.E.D. page 14 (epilogue)
Let's see what Yasmine thinks of the proceedings. Turns out, she has some complaints.
Panel 5: "And you left hair in my mouth. Presley, you're the worst."
I originally had this little extra bit scripted up on the end, but didn't wind up including it because I thought it wasn't necessary. In retrospect, the rest of the comic is written with a pretty heavy "pred gaze" (in the sense that the focus is almost entirely on the prey, which is more appealing when the reader is a pred), and this ending bit goes a little way towards balancing that. Though there's only so much I can do when the pred spends 90% of the comic asleep.
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Posted by Perodian 2 months ago Report
She could put it together to realize she ate two people instead of one. More weight than one person, proof she digested Presley at least, and hair from one other prey.
Posted by Xamas 2 months ago Report
amazing can we have some more unbirth or family vore
Posted by Gorgrath177 2 months ago Report
Man, poor girl must have trouble keeping a stable relationship. And a high plumbing bill.
Posted by Shadowfaps 2 months ago Report
Relationship-wise, my headcanon is that the "Quentin" she mentions here was a prior boyfriend, but your interpretation may vary.
Maybe she just needs to cultivate a kink for being handcuffed to the bed while she sleeps? Though if she's trying to solve her problem with applied kinkiness, she might just be better off developing an actual pred kink. It would be a lot harder for her to accidentally eat her lovers in her sleep if she already ate them on purpose while awake.
Posted by 4864278 2 months ago Report
Looking at the rest of that universe (and many more vore related work), I don't think it's the priority number 1 of most people.
Beside the strange fact that nobody seems worried about the demographics
Posted by MasterFXLXL 2 months ago Report
¡THAAAAAAAAAAANK YOOOOOOOOOOU!
¡I asked for this, and you listened it. Now this is as true ending for any Vore scenario! XD
By the way, are you gonna re-make the comic that start evertyhing? the "Three Roommates Playing a Game"?
Posted by Shadowfaps 2 months ago Report
I don't usually take reader suggestions, but the lack of character development for Yasmine was already something that seemed unsatisfying to me. I wrote this page when the comic was still in rough draft stage, and then scrapped it because I was already adding more banter between the preys in the stomach (most of the internal stuff on pages 11 and 12) and was worried that too many additions would lead to scope creep. You were right, though: the comic needed a little more focus on the pred at the end.
I doubt that I will do any remakes of prior comics, but I don't want to tie myself down either way. Any projects I am working on, if any, are on my blog. I have no current plans at the time of this writing.
Posted by MasterFXLXL 2 months ago Report
I see. Still, i apreciate it. Keep your great work, my friend
Posted by Shadowfaps 2 months ago Report
I hope I didn't come off as dickish there. Your suggestion was right on the money, I appreciate it, and I probably would not have finished out this page if you hadn't made it. I was just trying to explain things carefully to avoid setting a precedent; I get a lot of less-apt requests than yours.
Posted by MasterFXLXL 2 months ago Report
No-no, of course you are not a dickish or anything XP
You explained everything just fine. And trust me, we all apreciate it
Posted by prjones339 2 months ago Report
I'm in love.
Posted by LittleSlimy 2 months ago Report
Imagine complaining about people you eat while sleep walking, people who prefer to die than you chocke on them ... seriously some preds xD
Posted by Shadowfaps 2 months ago Report
But HAIR. In her MOUTH. Truly, nobody has suffered like Yasmine.
Posted by LittleSlimy 2 months ago Report
Well, thanks to this comic, I discovered sleep walking preds is really the least interesting type of vore, personally.
Posted by Shadowfaps 2 months ago Report
k
Posted by LittleSlimy 2 months ago Report
Yet looking your next comic, I love how casual you handle vore in your slice of life.
Posted by HunterFélix 2 months ago Report
Nice Epilogue.
I find Yasmine cute.
Posted by TrainerKatrine 2 months ago Report
Oh hey, you're the one who did family reunion! I thought your art style felt similar to something I'd seen before!
Great seeing your stuff again!
Posted by NavigerousVore 2 months ago Report
Yasmine perfect pred gf. I'd go out to town and bring back dumb college girls for her to eat
Posted by theonlymatt 2 months ago Report
Yesssss, bonus panel. I love how it's a callback the last page of Roomies
Posted by Shadowfaps 2 months ago Report
I was wondering if anyone would catch that. Good work finding the deep lore.
Posted by JohnnyF102 2 months ago Report
Love it
Posted by Devotedfoodslave69 2 months ago Report
GOD YES ＼(^o^)／
Posted by doomed 2 months ago Report
wow this is awesome
Posted by PaperWriter 2 months ago Report
This is a very nice finish to the story~ ^^
Posted by Kelly 2 months ago Report
YOOO I just checked your page out of Habbit and didnt even notice you did a new upload !
Posted by garry242 1 month ago Report
You are a master at your craft. Thank you for sharing your work.
Posted by HotGirlTummy 1 month ago Report
I loved both the original ending and the epilogue, but I'm really surprised you consider the original a "pred gaze" comic.
I'm a total prey, and this was SUPER hot to read from a prey perspective and to imagine myself as Imogen. Maybe I'm just a narcissist.
Posted by Shadowfaps 1 month ago Report
Interesting. I feel like self-inserting isn’t always necessary in these scenarios; preds seem to like vore heavily focused on the prey and vice-versa, for the same reason straight girls like gay porn and straight guys like lesbian porn. It's not necessarily about imagining the sexy thing happening to you, it's more about seeing the sexy person be involved in sexy happenings. But I'll admit, as a pred, it's possible I don't fully "get" what makes a scenario appealing to a prey. I just assumed all that art of "pred with big belly and no context for who or what is inside" has to be for SOMEBODY, since it does nothing whatsoever for me.
Don't take this as me disagreeing with you about your own preferences, though! I'm glad the scenario worked for you even before the pred got a moment to show off.
Posted by Zakthegutslut 3 weeks ago Report
On the note of being a prey myself what I find appealing is, it feels like watching domination or being dominated in a way. There's also the idea of giving all of myself or watching a prey give all of themselves to satisfy a preds dark desires and becoming one with them really gets me chasing butterflies. Plus there's the aspect of being surrounded in a a warm gushy place (with a feeling of closeness) and ravaged by someone's insides before becoming a part of them forever is SUPER HOT! Hope that helps you understand what a prey is thinking and I hope you can youse this to improve your stories!
Posted by Shadowfaps 2 weeks ago Report
Thanks for the explanation! More perspective is always good.
There are so many different incarnations of this fetish, it really seems like a thousand different fetishes all under the same umbrella. I'm always going to be writing these stories for myself first. Some people's version of the fetish will overlap entirely with mine. Some will require elements that are wholly incompatible. And some are in between, with enough overlap to see the appeal, but without hitting all of their buttons.
It sounds like you and I specifically overlap in the "prey being squeezed into a tight place" and "prey giving up everything" aspects. Unfortunately, domination by the pred is unlikely to come up in my stories. I like for the prey to be indifferent at worst. With a dominating pred, I'd have to spend time establishing that the prey isn't being forced. That's narrative baggage I'd rather avoid.
I'm glad my stories have seemingly worked for you so far without that element, though.
Posted by Zakthegutslut 2 weeks ago Report
Yes! there's definitely a lot of different fetishes that over lap your stories lol I'm thrilled we have a lot of overlaping kinks. I like willingly and unwilling preys for me it's mainly a good story, I don't expect you to make any accomodations for a fan. At the end of the day these beautiful works of art and stories are a reflection of yourself and I wouldn't want to ruin the art with my own selfish desires. I want to see what you want create and what kinks and desires you prefer most. I wouldn't ask Vincent Van Gogh to repaint starry night it's a classic! Same goes for your stories I'm honored you would take the time and effort you do into sharing these stories with me <3