Posted by IddlerItaler 2 months ago Report

A reformation story by you? I'll dive in. I'm curious to see what you can do with it.

"Work for free, get eaten and reformed for free?" Well, I guess I've seen worse job offers.

"At some point, she’d just stopped trying. It seemed that eating interns just wasn’t for her." Ooh, this is one of my favourite tropes. A pred who has 'retired' or doesn't even think of themselves as a pred, until they meet the right prey~ Now, in my stories it usually happens during the first meal, but I love a good slow burn too.

"Well, she didn’t really care, actually. She was just going to eat him and get back to work…" I also love this initial aloofness / detachment. Same about the way she starts off telling her meal to keep it in his pants, then becomes flustered by his hard-on, then starts to admire it...

"He was an intern. Her lunch. She was a manager, the woman that ate him. That was as far and as deep as their relationship went." Hihihi, the last famous words.

I also enjoyed the little tale of Tabitha getting 'accidentally' eaten by a manager once. That sounds like the kind of thing that would happen in your setting - or in most vore office settings. Kinda like your middle story with the catgirl. Luckily Tabitha was in one with reformation.

The story looks tagged pretty well. Could add a bit of extra tags like female pred, male prey and such, but the most important bases were covered. I guess age difference and soft vore could be specified, also weight gain and maybe head first and feet first.

Overall this was a lovely buildup for a lovely conclusion. Reformation haters have a habit to write off anything other than permanent death as cheap and meaningless, but I starkly disagree. This proved to be a pretty great story.

Posted by PaperWriter 2 months ago Report

I'm glad you enjoyed the emotional arc(?) of the story, it was a lot of fun trying to hit that right progression of detachment->denial->attachment... I started off with a list of scenes I wanted to include, but I was a little worried how the emotional pacing might feel from an actual reader perspective ^^'
I wanted to make her feel... like someone just going through the motions there at the start, and slowly progress her into someone more and more "alive"

Also idk if you were the one that added those specific tags, but many thanks if you were

Posted by IddlerItaler 2 months ago Report

Yea, I suggested those tags. I wasn't the one who voted out "Fatal digestion" though. I hate when people think death is not worthy of tagging just because it's not permanent.

Posted by PaperWriter 2 months ago Report

Huh, didn't even notice that one went missing... I guess on one hand, there is a big difference in the emotional impact if it's not "true" fatality, but on the other hand, yeah, that's kinda rude to take off a technically accurate tag

Posted by IddlerItaler 2 months ago Report

Yeah, agreed. Tagging the most glaring things is just basic courtesy, and demanding they be removed is kinda entitled...

"A character dies in this story, I'm gonna tag it fatal so that people know to look out."

"Uuugh, why did you tag it as fatal when the character doesn't stay dead? Such false advertisement."

My litmus test is that if you can picture the Mortal Kombat announcer shouting "fatality" as the prey gets digested, it's worth it to tag it fatal. People who want to avoid reformation can just blacklist that tag.

I do agree that there is a pretty significant difference in tone between reformation and no reformation, but so there is between romantic willing perma and cruel unwilling digestion, and they both fall into the fatal bracket. Fatal vore is a broad category with a variety of moods and tones no matter what, and the term fatal is synonymous with death (or more accurately, death-inducing), not just "certified 100% no resurrection lights out forever death".

(Technically, you can have some reformation scenarios which are ambiguously non-fatal, if there's a super-healing factor or a teleportation that sets in at the last moment before the prey dies, but there's also reformation scenarios where the pred has an ever-growing collection of their favourite prey's lifeless bones.)

Posted by PaperWriter 2 months ago Report

Guess I'll stick a fatal tag back on there, see if it goes missing again

Posted by Yumyum18 2 months ago Report

Aww, this was adorable
Imagine if she did get pregnant

He could go in her belly knowing he was feeding his kid

Posted by PaperWriter 2 months ago Report

:)

I imagine that's absolutely going to happen in their future, don't foresee her stopping eating him anytime soon ^^

Posted by doomed 2 months ago Report

lol benefits of being able to be reformed

Posted by PaperWriter 2 months ago Report

It makes for some fun interactions! ^^

Posted by siliconecyborg 2 months ago Report

I always seek out brutality in stories but every once in a while I find something nice and sweet!

Posted by PaperWriter 2 months ago Report

It can be pretty nice to read something different on occasion, can't it? :)

Posted by Loreman60 1 month ago Report

This story was great, I always love a romantic vore story.

Posted by PaperWriter 1 month ago Report

Thank you! ^^