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Made as a tribute to the Twilight Zone series, which I could never emulate, but can try.
Bandit receives a strange little canister from a friend, but when he uses the contents he finds the effects are far more effective than he originally thought.
Contains: F/m, soft vore, references that I hope won't get me sued.
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Posted by Slash 16 years ago Report
Awesome writing. You got the Twilight Zone feel down. I couldn't help but read on to find out who eats him. So many potenial preds. In the end, a fun read.
Heh heh...a Bat pred? Nice!^^
Posted by BerserkerB 16 years ago Report
Thanks buddy. I wanted to do a bat pred for a long time, and this just seemed like the right time.
Posted by Radijs 16 years ago Report
Nicely done! Indeed worthy of the twilight zone!
Posted by BerserkerB 16 years ago Report
Thank you very much. I could never produce a the thrillers of that caliber, but I can at least try.
Posted by Iceninja 16 years ago Report
This reminds me of a Tiny Toons episode. Hamton gets splashed with a chemical that makes him smell delicious, so everyone tries to eat him, including his best friend.
Posted by BerserkerB 16 years ago Report
That sounds familiar, thought it has been far too long for me to remember.
Posted by Carni-vore 16 years ago Report
Ya I remember that episode. In fact I have it taped on a cassette some where I believe. I'm more reminded of Axe body spray commercials myself, specially the new one where it's a chocolate dude that the girls are chasing.
Posted by BerserkerB 16 years ago Report
That also inspired this story.
Posted by Iceninja 16 years ago Report
The chocolate Axe body spray commercial? Hah, I love that. I wish the guy lost more than his arm.
oh, and on topic, that was a very good story, BeserkerB.
Posted by zearo8 16 years ago Report
Nice story! ^..^
Posted by BerserkerB 16 years ago Report
Thank you. XD
Posted by Fidel2323 16 years ago Report
oh yeah, that was really good
nice idea :D
Posted by BerserkerB 16 years ago Report
Thank you very much.
Posted by Tsavo 16 years ago Report
Brings back good memories of watching the marathons way back when. Good story, good stuff, good job as usual. :)
Posted by BerserkerB 16 years ago Report
Thanks. I'm glad you enjoyed it.
Posted by Sith 16 years ago Report
cant get enuff of your stories beserker, you rock
Posted by BerserkerB 16 years ago Report
I'm just happy you like them.