Posted by atak 15 years ago Report

Murrrrr, ^^ what a wonderful story! Hee, I liked how much Yves seemed to dwell on his fate. How he was just one of many people that Cherry had eaten, and would be eating.
And that when she ate him, he was just part of her dinner... She was sweet to him, and nice to him, during her visit. But, she made it perfectly and simply clear to him that she was going to simply go on with her life after him. It made no difference to her if he gave himself for her dinner or not, her trip would have been the same either way, and her life will continue the same either way just fine!

Hee, and I did love how she pooped him out without a second thought, and even peed on his remains, which in a way showed how very very little she cared or thought for him or his remains! ^^ She is such a delightfully casual and uncaring predator!

Wonderful work as always!

Posted by Bitter 15 years ago Report

You're a master of the form, sir.

Posted by French_snack 15 years ago Report

Thank you both! I'm glad you liked it. :)

Posted by Sarus 15 years ago Report

Excellent story, I enjoyed it a lot! :)
I especially like its casual and peaceful atmosphere.

One thing I'm curious about is what motivates Cherry to swallow up people; I wonder what she'd answer if her next meal asked her that before disappearing in her belly :P

J'en rajoute une couche en français: bien écrit, personnages attanchants, ambiance super sympa, le top quoi :P

Posted by French_snack 15 years ago Report

Thank you. (Merci pour le commentaire!) To answer your question, she took part in the first vore competition because it sounded fun. She wondered what it would feel like to have someone in her tummy, and since there were people willing to be eaten, she tried it. She really enjoyed it, and simply got hooked. ;)

She might feel a bit embarassed if her meal asked her! How do you tell someone: "Uhm, I'm going to enjoy eating you because it's fun"? :D

Posted by kokeman 8 years ago Report

Maaan your stories ate just amazing, I personally would love it if there were some more interaction between prey and pred once in the stomach, like Yves could be hearing and answering Cherry when she asks hoe he's doing and so... that would be the perfect topping! ^^

Posted by French_snack 8 years ago Report

Thanks! Regarding interaction post-swallow: I'd thought of that once, but Cherry would really prefer not. As she's said a few times, she's a "gulp-and-forget kind of girl". ;)