Story 19 - Lost in Felarya, ch 1
By French_snack -- Report
Felarya is Karbo's creation.
This story is inspired by the television series "Lost". There will be about a dozen main characters among the crash survivors, most of whom have a guilty secret - they've done something they're ashamed of. For now, here's chapter 1 - setting the scene, and introducing some of the characters. All characters here (humans and Felaryans) are my own.
Chapter 2 is here:
http://aryion.com/g3/showitem.php?id=168537
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Posted by Karbo 17 years ago Report
this start really nicely ! As usual, excellent writting and awesome descriptions ;)
Posted by French_snack 17 years ago Report
Thank you! :) The next chapter will probably reveal something about one of the characters.
Posted by Tsavo 17 years ago Report
Oooh, wonder what will happen next.
Posted by French_snack 17 years ago Report
Find out here! Chapter 2 is done. :)
http://aryion.com/g3/showitem.php?id=168537
Posted by naruto7568426 17 years ago Report
Ooh! I like it so far! Keep up the good work! =) Oh yeah, hey, do you know what happened to Tifalover? No one will tell me or does'nt seem to know...
Posted by French_snack 17 years ago Report
Thank you! There have been seven chapters done so far.
Sorry, I've no idea what happened to Tifalover.
Posted by naruto7568426 17 years ago Report
Your welcome. I just love Felarya!
*sigh* Aw man...I can't believe no one knows what happened to him...what about Karbo? Do you think he knows anything?
Posted by oishi1 14 years ago Report
even as vague as they are in this first chapter your characters have great variety and a good deal of "realness" to them. I look forward to the rest of this.
Posted by French_snack 14 years ago Report
Thanks. Each character is developed a little in the subsequent chapters.
Posted by Trajan 8 months ago Report
J'ai jamais vu lost, donc je sais pas à quel point c'est inspiré, mais personellement c'est l'une des meilleurs histoires (l'ensemble de losr in Felarya) que j'ai pu lire sur ce site. Fin en vrai je lis pas beaucoup ici, mais sache que j'ai beaucoup apprécié cette dérie quand je l'ai lue il y a maintenant quelques années.
Posted by French_snack 8 months ago Report
Merci ! C'est gentil de me l'avoir dit.
Difficile de croire que c'était il y a seize ans !
Posted by Trajan 8 months ago Report
Cette histoire était postée que j'étais même pas au collège (je l'ai lu alors que j'étais en licence perso). Je sais pas comment je l'ai trouvée (probablement via le wiki), mais à ce compte-là ça devrait compter comme travail archéologique.