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Belatedly, the story of what happened to Jissy after she was turned into a human. In fact, it's more of a focus on her relationship with Roshan.
The initial story, where she was turned into a human (and met Niree), is here (the second of the two stories on the page): http://aryion.com/g3/showitem.php?id=165911
Jissy and Roshan's backstory is here: http://aryion.com/g3/showitem.php?id=166161
All characters here belong to Karbo, except Jissy, Roshan, Niree and Ajab (who appears just briefly).
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Posted by atak 15 years ago Report
It is very nice to get to see what's become of Jissy and Roshan. I am curious how she got turned into a human, but it's very good to see her predatory side hasn't left her!
I wonder if she plays with her food any more now than she used to? Or if she still just eats to be full and all?
Posted by French_snack 15 years ago Report
Well, Jissy has a *bit* of a playful side. She likes to hold her food for a long time in her mouth before swallowing, for example.
Posted by atak 15 years ago Report
Ohhh, that is very nice for those fortunate enough to be her food; which it seems she has no problem doing to most every human except for Roshan! I wonder what else she likes to do with her fortunate food?
Posted by MilkChocolate 15 years ago Report
French Snack is unstoppable.
Posted by Griffinsummoner 15 years ago Report
Excuse me, but what is a "neera"?
Great story as always.
Posted by French_snack 15 years ago Report
Thanks. Neeras are one of the tiny species found in Felarya: http://www.felarya.com/wiki/index.php?title=Minor_races#Neeras.
Posted by Krisexy 15 years ago Report
ooooh!! quelle belle histoire!!
heureusement que tu as a fait recracher niree de crisis! je laurais un peu moin pris celle-la.
encore une fois, un masterpiece de french-snack ;P
une autre question stupide de ma part..cets quoi ton nom?:O:O
Posted by French_snack 15 years ago Report
Merci! Je trouve intéressant qu'il y ait certaines proies qu'on n'a pas envie de voir se faire manger. ;)
Pour mon nom, par contre, je me le suis toujours gardé pour moi. ;)
Posted by Krisexy 15 years ago Report
aah t pas fin :(
meme pas ton prénom?:(
Posted by French_snack 15 years ago Report
Désolé, mais non. Ca fait plus d'un an que je suis ici, et je n'ai dit mon nom à personne.
"T'es pas fin"? C'est bien; j'apprends des expressions québécoises. ;)
Posted by Krisexy 15 years ago Report
XDXD
Posted by Krauser 15 years ago Report
I really have no Idea how I missed this story, this has to be one of my favourite of yours. I love all the vore and stuff, hell, its my favourite thing about felarya, but I also really enjoy seeing... im not quite sure it's the right word... philosophical aspect of felarya. Whats right or wrong?
The whole reality of the differences of nagas and humans, the emotions and who they consider people. I really love seeing when human opinion and naga opinion clash, like when Milly and Isham argued about whether eating humans/nekos ect was a bad thing. It makes a predator/prey friendship so interesting to explore. The fact that they can see some humans as friends, but others as food.... I'd love to see more of this.
I don't know if you appreciate this kind of feedback, so I'm sorry if I bothered you. I'd hate to give the impression that I'm telling you how to write your stories. I guess I'll leave it at that before I write my own novel in your comments section.
Posted by French_snack 15 years ago Report
I *do* appreciate this kind of feedback; very much so. Thank you. It's interesting for me to know that you liked that aspect, and I'm glad you enjoyed the story. :)
Posted by devilnaga 2 years ago Report
I thought Niree got gurgaled in the end the first time I read this? Did you change it? Was there an alternate vision?
Posted by French_snack 2 years ago Report
No, this was always the only version. Which was probably quite traumatic enough for poor Niree! ;)