"Artful Death"
By Gentle_Grounds -- Report
An artist discovers that one of his art projects maybe more realistic than thought.
This is my very first furry story. I was inspired to write a story based on Shyguy's toon, Sophia, a dragoness that I would not mind being eaten by. She's so pretty.
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Posted by French_snack 16 years ago Report
That was certainly a bit different. I like the twist at the end, and the possibilities it raises. Her certainties turning into doubts - too late.
Posted by Gentle_Grounds 16 years ago Report
Yeah, I didn't like how it turned out. Then again, I need to really research about furries.
Posted by French_snack 16 years ago Report
Not necessarily; you can do your own thing. If you want to write about a dragoness, you don't need to feel bound by a genre.
Posted by Gentle_Grounds 16 years ago Report
True. I take it will improve later through practice. I just did not feel a connection with the characters in this one. The dragoness, perhaps not human enough. Don, realistic response to a monster, but too cliche.
Think about it, vore stories in general are cliched: Boy meets girl, girls kisses boy, boy pisses off girl, girl eats boy, girl sleeps and digests. I'll probably hit back to the drawing boards -- something needs to be new around here. I already did the blog about vore, regarding real life scenarios and vore as if it was real. So, I can think of something.
Posted by Generationslayer 16 years ago Report
will this continue?
Posted by Gentle_Grounds 16 years ago Report
Probably not. It would just be a repeat of what happened in this story.
Posted by Very 16 years ago Report
Hahaha... I love moral conflicts. So much.
Also it amuses me how it drags on (that is almost like a bad pun) before she finally gobbles him up, which was a bit anticlimactic but still satisfying since I adore how you write digestion... Ah, and the feeling of remorse...
But damn. I've pondered *so* many times about what would happen if my characters existed, particularly the predatory ones. I would've died equally many times! XD
But anyways, great work as usual.