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Contains F/F soft vore and mild digestion.
A woman stranded on an island believes the fantasies in her mind,a mermaid takes advantage.
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Posted by Bitter 15 years ago Report
If you'll forgive a backhanded compliment, this is leagues better than some of your earlier works. Your mechanics still aren't perfect, but you're showing clear improvement over time, which is commendable. Keep up the good work, chap.
Posted by Entity 15 years ago Report
It was written in less than two hours so i'm not too bothered and to be honest,I hate my early work.
Posted by Anonymous 14 years ago Report
Your early work was good, it just had a few "conventions errors." Namely grammar.
Posted by Entity 14 years ago Report
Maybe i'll go over everything in the future and rewrite but at the moment i'm too busy.
Posted by Anonymous 14 years ago Report
It's fine how it is, but I was trying to think of a possible fault in your early work, since you said you hate it.
Posted by Entity 14 years ago Report
At least I had lots of ideas a couple of years ago and no distractions. Now I'm lucky if I can work on my latest stories XD
Posted by The K 15 years ago Report
Really good vore story.
Posted by Entity 15 years ago Report
Thanks,glad you like it
Posted by I Is New 101 15 years ago Report
Well done, my friend, well done.
Posted by Entity 15 years ago Report
Thank you
Posted by keyblademark 15 years ago Report
good mermaid story :)
Posted by Entity 15 years ago Report
Thanks
Posted by keyblademark 15 years ago Report
you are welcome :)
Posted by predator_or_prey 15 years ago Report
Careful what you wish for, Eve...
Posted by Entity 15 years ago Report
Exactly
Posted by Redpod 14 years ago Report
Very nice icture :D