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Tags: neeta swallow gulp
Story written for ZeWhatcher because he's such a great person who's incredibly kind
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Posted by keyblademark 15 years ago Report
good story, it was really good ^_^
Posted by TW 15 years ago Report
Thank you again. I enjoyed the story. :)
Posted by Entity 15 years ago Report
No problem :)
Posted by Fidel2323 15 years ago Report
good story^^ dramatic, poetic, phylosophical :)
Posted by Entity 15 years ago Report
I'm glad you think so
Posted by Bright 14 years ago Report
I really like this one, but I am not sure why. Maybe it is because of the predator logic.
Posted by Entity 14 years ago Report
It was written in three or so hours,probably less
Thank TW for the predator logi becasue it's his character XD
Posted by Bright 14 years ago Report
Just realized I could favourite stories.
Posted by Entity 14 years ago Report
really?
Posted by Bright 14 years ago Report
Yeah, and my first thought was like:
"Damn, I must remember to favourite this one."
I think I came up with another reason why I like this one. Clothes (this case jumpsuit) that restrains the belly.
Posted by Entity 14 years ago Report
Like tight clothing huh?
Posted by Bright 14 years ago Report
It is either that, or that the clothes hide the preys appearance. Making chances even slimmer to escape or to get noticed.
Posted by Entity 14 years ago Report
Well as long as you like it i'm happy.